From the course: Editing Mastery: How to Edit Writing to Perfection
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Is every point relevant?
From the course: Editing Mastery: How to Edit Writing to Perfection
Is every point relevant?
- Okay, guys, so, remember that we established our purpose in a earlier stage of the edit. We defined exactly what it was that we wanted to achieve through this particular piece of writing and we came up with something like this. The article is aimed at informing Sri Lankans about a new government plan to label sugary drinks to help improve the nation's health. Now, with this purpose clearly in mind, we want to now evaluate each point to determine whether it's relevant to that purpose. We already saw, kept all the points that made sense but now we're looking at whether it's relevant to the purpose that we've set up. Literally delete anything that you think isn't relevant. You may not find anything but it's a process you gotta go through and the process is somewhat subjective. You may feel that something is relevant that I or someone else may think is irrelevant and that's okay as long as you're guided by your instinct. Just consider whether each point is relevant or not and if in…
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What is the territory of the piece?4m 35s
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Sample article8m 22s
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What is its ultimate purpose?1m 23s
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What are the individual points?1m 27s
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Demonstration: Breaking up the points19m 37s
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Does every point make sense?1m 17s
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Demonstration: Making sense of each point8m 36s
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Is every point relevant?2m 19s
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Demonstration: Deleting irrelevant points2m 19s
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Is every point worthwhile?1m 42s
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Demonstration: Eliminating rambling10m 24s
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Is every point unique?1m 17s
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Demonstration: Getting rid of repetition15m 58s
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Are all the "facts" correct?2m 16s
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Demonstration: Verifying the "facts"9m 15s
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Is anything missing?1m 19s
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Demonstration: Adding in missing information4m 29s
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