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Fancy, flowery, and official language: Exercises
From the course: Writing with Flair: How to Become an Exceptional Writer
Fancy, flowery, and official language: Exercises
- Deconstruct this sentence in the same way that I showed you before. Pause the video and have a go. In the light of the extent, scale, range, and immeasurable complexity of the uncertainties that persist on the economic front, we conclude, having evaluated the country's mid-to-long-term prospects, that multifarious scenarios could yet unfold. Now, I get this. This next sentence also needs translation because it's definitely not plain speaking. It's one made up by George Orwell to make a point about the bureaucratic jargon that he was so against. Objective considerations of contemporary phenomena compel the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity but that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be taken into account. It's very inaccessible, isn't it, and comprehension is very slow, if at all possible. Translate it into as few and familiar words as possible. If you really edit it down…
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The beauty of simplicity1m 29s
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Fancy, flowery, and official language6m 16s
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Fancy, flowery, and official language: Exercises2m 24s
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Economical ("tight") writing1m 43s
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Economical ("tight") writing: Exercises5m 53s
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Redundant words51s
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Redundant words: Exercises1m 37s
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More implied words57s
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More implied words: Exercises1m 34s
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Long words3m 3s
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Long words: Exercises4m 56s
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Careless repetition3m 31s
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Careless repetition: Exercises8m 21s
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Rambling (saying too much)4m 48s
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Double negatives3m 35s
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Multiply entities2m 47s
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Overstretching thoughts9m 51s
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Unnecessary ceremony2m 53s
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Unnecessary ceremony: Exercises3m 39s
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Excessive punctuation4m 33s
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