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Demonstration: Arranging paragraphs

Demonstration: Arranging paragraphs

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Demonstration: Arranging paragraphs

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- [Instructor] Okay, so here's my effort at putting the points that we have into helpful paragraphs. This first one is okay. I think that can stay on its own for this news article. And I'm gonna put these two together. From August first, all soft drink companies will have to display a color code on their bottles showing consumers at a glance whether the sugar content in them may be harmful. The so-called traffic-light labeling system will help people to know instantly if the quantity of sugar in a soft drink is high, medium, or low. Now red will show this, amber will show this, and green will show this. I will put those together, and I will also link that to this one. The government plans later to introduce a similar coding system to highlight salt and fat content. I feel that that kinda gives it, it rounds that off. It's just an aside, so I think that works well. Latest measures have been planned for five years, and they were outlined by this person. I'll put that together. Under the…

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