From the course: Crafting Dynamic Characters
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Exercise: What's really being said
From the course: Crafting Dynamic Characters
Exercise: What's really being said
- For this exercise, we are going to give you a scene of dialogue without any tags and with no interiority. As you'll see, the dialogue is pretty bland and can go many different ways. It's your job as the writer to not only figure out who the two people are in the conversation, and remember, one of them also needs to be a POV character, but also what's really going on in the scene. You can see the dialogue on the screen, but you'll also find it in the handout called "What's Really Being Said?" that's included with this lecture. Take about 20 to 30 minutes to try and transform the dialogue into the three types, straightforward, subtext, and deceitful, and add interiority to your POV character to give this scene meaning. So by the end of the exercise, you should have three different scenes. Feel free to add some lines to the dialogue if that helps you flesh out the scene a bit more. This snippet of dialogue is just to get…
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A new spin on show vs. tell7m 23s
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Point of view4m 43s
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Tool 1: Revealing character through thought12m 10s
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Exercise: Penny for your thoughts2m 10s
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Instructor jam: Penny for your thoughts4m 23s
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Tool 2: Revealing character through reaction9m 10s
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Exercise: Reaction shot2m 8s
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Instructor jam: Reaction shot4m 21s
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Tool 3: Revealing character through dialogue8m 16s
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Exercise: What's really being said1m 45s
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Instructor jam: What's really being said7m 5s
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Tool 4: Revealing character through voice9m 49s
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Exercise: Voice extremes2m 53s
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Instructor jam: Voice extremes23m 29s
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Tool 5: Revealing character through emotion10m 8s
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Exercise: Emotional taboo2m 8s
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Instructor jam: Emotional taboo5m 51s
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Tool 6: Revealing character through inner struggle16m 51s
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Exercise: Easily triggered3m 26s
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Instructor jam: Easily triggered16m 55s
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Tool 7: Revealing character through other characters10m 35s
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Exercise: What can you do for me?5m 21s
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Instructor jam: What can you do for me?17m 44s
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