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2010 SBIFF Writers' Panel: It Starts with the Script

2010 SBIFF Writers' Panel: It Starts with the Script

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As a sponsor of the 25th Annual Santa Barbara International Film Festival, lynda.com is delighted to put you in the front row of four fascinating panel discussions with some of Hollywood's top filmmakers, including a number of Golden Globe, Emmy, Grammy, and Academy Award winners and nominees. Join us for the writer's panel featuring Alex Kurtzman (Star Trek) and Nancy Myers (It's Complicated).

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Writers' Panel - It Starts with the Script
Introduction
00:00(Music playing.)
00:29Jason Reitman: I find when adapting, look, there is part of it that makes it easy, in that you
00:32are stealing someone else's genius.
00:35And it's the best writing partner on earth, because they just give, give, give,
00:39and never argue with any of your notes.
00:40Alex Kurtzman: And we realized that's exactly why we have to do it, because if we don't protect it and someone
00:44else does this, and we go to that theater and hate it, then the person most
00:47culpable will be us.
00:48Scott Neustadter: We had like a 110 page first act.
00:51And that's when we realized, I am like, "Oh, wow, this is going nowhere.
00:56Some of it's funny. Some of it's horrible. Where are we going?"
00:59Nancy Meyers: I did want just to challenge myself to try to write a movie that worked
01:06comedically, in sort of a full throttle kind of way.
01:10Geoffrey Fletcher: I didn't know if any one would, if it would be made or seen or even widely seen,
01:14but I did know that I was never more fulfilled to work on anything in my life.
01:21(Music playing.)
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Defining genre
00:00(Music playing.)
00:07Roger Durling: Let's start with Jason Reitman, "Up in the Air."
00:10(Applause)
00:15Scott Neustadter, "500 Days of Summer." [00:00:18.0] (Applause)
00:21Nancy Meyers, "It's Complicated."
00:24Alex Kurtzman, "Star Trek" and "Transformers."
00:29Geoffrey Fletcher, "Precious."
00:32Pete Docter, "Up."
00:35(Applause)
00:37Mark Boal, "The Hurt Locker."
00:40(Applause)
00:41And please welcome an old friend of the festival, moderator Anne Thompson.
00:47She writes for indieWIRE, and she has a great podcast, Oscar Talk.
00:52(Applause)
00:55Anne Thompson: Thank you very much.
00:58We have an amazing group this year and they have already all amassed an
01:02unbelievable amount of awards and nominations and wins, and we were not going to
01:07go into the long list that each of them has at this point.
01:11Jason Reitman and Nancy Meyers have been here before.
01:13Welcome back, old veterans. Jason Reitman: We're old pros.
01:18My first question for the panel, a rundown, we'll run down and we'll start with Jason at the other end,
01:25all of your films have defied the rules of what a standard genre would be.
01:32You've paid no attention to them, as far as I can tell, even Star Trek.
01:36So go down - explain what genre your film actually is, if you could define it.
01:42Jason Reitman: The genre of my film is a midlife crisis-comedy-tragedy.
01:51Anne: All right. How about you, Scott?
01:54Scott Neustadter: We always called ours a - it's a coming-of-age story masquerading as a romantic comedy.
01:59Jason: Hm, nice Scott: That's how we always talked about it.
02:01Anne: And Nancy?
02:05You don't own to romantic comedy. Do you?
02:08Nancy Meyers: Pardon me? Anne: On this one, on "It's Complicated."
02:10Nancy Meyers: Relationship comedy.
02:12Anne: And Star Trek, what is that?
02:15Alex Kurtzman: A sci-fi brother story.
02:20Anne Thompson: Geoffrey?
02:21Geoffrey Fletcher: I have an answer.
02:23that's probably annoying, but, first of all, I don't know.
02:27I'm too close to it, and I really don't know.
02:31One could say maybe it's a coming-of- age story, but so many of the films I
02:36love, they sort of transcend or defy the genre.
02:39It's like I don't consider "The Searchers" a western or "Star Wars" science fiction.
02:45So, I don't know, but perhaps a coming-of-age? It's a stretch,
02:51Geoffrey: but something along those lines. Anne: Perhaps, perhaps. Pete?
02:54Pete Docter: At varying times, we refer to ours as a coming-of-old-age story,
02:58(Laughter)
03:02and also an action adventure starring an old man, so?
03:06(Laughter)
03:07Anne: Mark?
03:08Mark Boal: We really thought of it as a love story between the two, between Sanborn and James.
03:16No. I mean, it's a war film and my brother described it as an art-cowboy-rock-'n'-roll
03:24war movie, and I'll take that.
03:26I think that's a good description.
03:29Anne: Well, back to the idea of romantic comedy.
03:33Nancy and Scott, why has this genre fallen into such disarray and disrepute?
03:41What's wrong with it?
03:42Why is it such a disaster?
03:44Why does it need to be reinvented?
03:47Nancy: Go ahead.
03:48(Laughter)
03:50Scott: Well, I think that a lot of times you can tell that it was made - actor A,
03:57actress B, obstacle.
04:00How long can we keep that obstacle going? Throw in some jokes.
04:04The romantic comedy,
04:06like the comedy wasn't coming from the romance.
04:08There wasn't really any romance in the relationship.
04:10It was a lot of packaging.
04:13I think audiences can smell that.
04:14And they still kind of go, which always made me scratch my head.
04:19Jason: Maybe that's what's wrong with them, is that people just go anyway.
04:21Scott: Yeah. So they make more of them. That's what happens Jason: The audience isn't teaching us a lesson enough.
04:26Scott: Yeah, it's your fault, basically.
04:28Jason: Yeah. No, I think it's best to throw it back on them as much as possible. Don't take--
04:33Anne: Well Jason, you're playing around with a romantic comedy too, in a way, in "Up in
04:40the Air." Would you deny that?
04:41There is romance in it, of a sort.
04:44Jason: I think - I don't know.
04:50I made a movie about a guy who fires people for living.
04:52I wouldn't exactly call it a romantic comedy, but I think, at the end of the
04:55day, romance is a technique, and that it's one of the techniques that we
04:59each have in our bag.
05:02I think that's the best way to defy genre.
05:04If you think of genres as techniques that you can use, and you can use
05:07multiple techniques in the film, you're bound to make something more original,
05:10rather than if you just follow the genre for where it is.
05:13Anne: Nancy, "It's Complicated."
05:18Nancy: Yeah. No, I was thinking about your original question.
05:20I think there is something sexist at play here in a romantic comedy if
05:24you're going to star a 28 year old woman - and I don't think they're going
05:27to work that hard on it.
05:28I don't think they're going to attempt to do well.
05:30Honestly. Because you don't have to get George Clooney in this movie.
05:36So, I think they toss those movies away a little bit in the development process.
05:39Not saying that the development process leads to great work, but you know, I think it's
05:45kind of like they'll make one, and it's like over there, and they don't
05:50worry about it that much.
05:50Anne: When you write "It's Complicated," you're not necessarily aiming it just at woman, right?
05:58Nancy: Which they? Me?
06:01Anne: You. You, Nancy.
06:01Nancy: Am I aiming it for women?
06:04I'd like them to come, yeah, but no, I'm not.
06:08No, because, I mean, I write pretty big parts for the men.
06:12I try to get interesting men in my movies.
06:15I think men like to see themselves on the screen doing things that are other
06:19than, bigger than what people really do.
06:21Men have relationships. They fall in love. They get heartbroken... I think.
06:27(Laughter)
06:31Anne: Well Alex, you produced a romantic comedy in "The Proposal," which is one of
06:36the most successful of the year.
06:38A lot of people don't know that.
06:42Why did that one work so well?
06:44What did you do right there?
06:45Alex: I am admittedly very limited in my experience on this, because that was the
06:51first romantic comedy I had ever worked on.
06:55I think that it started with 'everybody hates their boss,' before it became - the romantic comedy
07:02element was second. It was 'everybody really wants to get their boss on their knees,'
07:06and that was, I think, the fire that started the development of that.
07:13We actually developed that with someone who was running our company, who then
07:15went on to become a great screenwriter, and that was really exciting.
07:19But because I'm not an authority, I don't think I could speak to it in the way
07:23that these guys could.
07:24Anne: So Geoffrey and Jason, you both adapted books for this.
07:30How, was that a helpful thing, or was it really difficult?
07:35I mean having something to work from.
07:36Talk about that, Geoffrey.
07:38Geoffrey: Well, this particular book, it was both very tough and very fun.
07:51It's tough because we've got the voice of a semi-literate character and there are
07:56some very difficult moments that are happening.
08:02To make that into something that's cinematic and accessible, but still retains
08:07the impact of that powerful, powerful book, was a bit of a journey for me as
08:15well, difficult every day, but fulfilling every day.
08:21I think the way in for difficult material is, some kind of identification, and I
08:29fell in love with Precious, probably in page one or two.
08:33And I suspect it's like parents who struggle for their children, where they
08:39might look back one day and wonder how they did it, but if you feel so much for
08:45them, you figure it out.
08:48Anne: Thank you. Jason?
08:50Jason: Yeah, well first, I'm really impressed by the adaptation that you did.
08:58I can only imagine how tricky it was in addition, because you had a beloved book
09:03that you're adapting, and that must be terrifying
09:06when you know that people are really waiting for this movie, and they're going
09:08to be looking to you to see what they did, what you did.
09:12In my case, I had a book that was about flying, that literally came out the week
09:17of September 11th and was immediately buried.
09:20No one ever read "Up in the Air."
09:22Jason: So I did not have Mark: I read "Up in the Air."
09:23Jason: Sorry? Mark: I read "Up in the Air."
09:25Jason: Well, yes, but you are a literary. Mark: It was a best-seller.
09:30(Laughter)
09:32Jason: I was worried about you Mark and you alone. Mark: But point taken, point well-taken.
09:34(Laughter)
09:39Jason: Frankly, I find when adapting, look, there is part of it that makes it easy, in
09:43that you are stealing someone else's genius.
09:46And it's the best writing partner on earth, because they just give, give, give,
09:50and never argue with any of your notes.
09:54However, the tricky part is trying to figure out what is the difference
09:58between a book and a movie.
10:01In the case of "Up in the Air," there was things that were very cinematic that I wanted to use.
10:04There was a main character, whose philosophy I found really intriguing,
10:09not only his attitude towards firing people, but his attitude towards living
10:13alone, living seamlessly.
10:15I loved his obsession with air miles seeing that I'm obsessed with them myself,
10:22but there was a lot that needed to be added to make it a movie.
10:29The tricky part is finding new stuff that works with these characters that exists
10:32in the book, and then deleting stuff and not feeling guilty about it.
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Personal writing process
00:00(Music playing.)
00:09Anne Thompson: I am going to get in to the whole question of how you wrote, you know, what your
00:13process is, which is, to me, the most fascinating part of all of this.
00:17And Mark, I am going to start with you. You were embedded in Iraq and you
00:23communicated with Katherine Bigelow during that period and then how did that
00:26become a screenplay? And what was your process? And how did you work with her on that?
00:30Mark Boal: Yeah, I was in Baghdad in 2004, as a reporter and somewhere - I didn't quite
00:39really know what I was getting into, although I should have, in retrospect
00:42but, you know, it was very dangerous and there were sort of like bodies
00:48all over the place and people blowing up and, at some point, it occurred to me
00:51that I should find a safer line of work.
00:54And I had had some experience working with Paul Haggis on a different project and -
01:03Anne: "In the Valley of Elah."
01:05Mark: Yeah. So sort of had this crazy idea maybe I could turn some of my experiences into a screenplay.
01:11And I knew Katherine from a couple of years before.
01:14We had done something for Fox, a TV show that sort of didn't go anywhere, but yeah.
01:22So then when I came back, I called her up and I proposed this idea of me as
01:26a screenwriter and she said - she was very encouraging and I kind of gave her a
01:32sense of what I wanted to do, even though I didn't really know, and that's how
01:38it all started.
01:39And a year later we had, or 8 months later, we had a script and nobody wanted
01:47it except for her.
01:50And so there was then sort of a process of realizing that getting a movie made
01:55was a bit of an art in itself, and but that's kind of how it started.
02:00Anne: How did you figure out what your story was and what you narrative was and how
02:03did you, literally, sit down?
02:05I mean, were you were at a computer? Were at home? Were you sharing drafts?
02:09Mark: I was at a computer, yeah.
02:12Well it was really the idea was to try to - I was terrified when I was over
02:17there and it was, by far, the scariest experience of my life and I wanted to
02:24share that feeling with the world.
02:27And so it's really a way - the idea was to try to capture the tension of being
02:31in Baghdad and tell the story through the eyes of these guys
02:35that have this very unusual job, gutsy job, very dangerous job. And that was kind of the frame.
02:42And then, I don't know, through the process of writing, I kind of found the
02:48story and found a main character and two other characters to be foils for him.
02:52I am not really sure I could unpack how it all happened, but it was
02:58definitely a process.
02:59Anne: Pete, the Pixar process is a very different one, very collegial,
03:06very collaborative.
03:08We had Tom McCarthy up here.
03:10We've had Andrew Stanton up here, but it isn't the same for all of you.
03:14So how would you, how would you describe your version of the Pixar process?
03:18Pete Docter: Yeah, we all have slightly different working methods.
03:21I guess, for me, writing a film is a little bit like dream analysis.
03:25You'll have those dreams where you're being chased by lions holding a bunch of
03:29bananas and you wake up going "Whoa!"
03:30You are in sweats and what was that all about and you don't really know
03:35until you start writing and diving more in.
03:38And so the film is the same way where you just kind of start with something that
03:41intrigues you, and you don't really know why and it's somewhere along the way
03:45you find out what it is you are actually doing.
03:50And for us, we also had this extra step that I don't think many of you guys go
03:54through, I don't know, which we call story reels.
03:57And we will, basically, with a small team of artists, 3 or 4, up to 6 or 7 I guess,
04:03artists will storyboard the whole thing, almost like a comic book.
04:06And then we'll do our own dialogue and music and sound effects and that's kind
04:09of our version of a table read.
04:10But in that way, we can sit in the theater and project the movie that we haven't
04:14shot yet and get a sense for whether it's working or not.
04:17Most of the time it's not.
04:19So we go back and we rewrite things, and rip stuff out, and change things.
04:22And there is some parts that come together very quickly and other parts that you
04:26just struggle through.
04:28We had one part on "Up" that we rewrote no fewer than 50 times, so...
04:32Anne: Talk about that.
04:33You talked about that in Cannes a little bit.
04:35There was this one thing you could not solve, a problem that you could not fix.
04:40Pete: Well this film was particularly odd because we had all these strange elements of
04:45you know, a man, a floating house, a talking dogs, a thirteen-foot tall flightless bird,
04:49just all stuff that, initially, to be frank, I just thought was cool.
04:53So we started putting it in, and then we had the tough job of connecting them all together.
04:58And that's really why the rewriting took so long was we had to figure out how does
05:03an old man who floats his house come into direct opposition with this aging
05:08adventurer who is off after - what is he after? And so there was a lot of
05:14rewriting in that to try to get those two elements to kind of vibrate in the same frequency,
05:19if that make sense.
05:20Anne: Absolutely. And Bob Peterson and you worked together. How did that work?
05:26Pete Docter: We would usually just start out in his office talking and we'd outline and
05:32then, at some point, we'd split up and he'd would write a part and I'd write a part.
05:35And we swap pages.
05:36And yeah, it's kind of messy, but we don't know any better way.
05:43Anne: And then when you figure out that something isn't working, you can go back and
05:47do the sound over again. Is that right?
05:49Anne: And do it over? Pete: Yes, because at that point,
05:51when we are doing story reels, it's all just us.
05:53We're doing our own temporary, you know, doing my best Ed Asner
05:56impersonation or whatever.
05:57And that way we are not bothering the actors as we rewrite, and rewrite,
06:01and rewrite.
06:02So by the time they come in, its, well, it's closer to what we want.
06:07Anne: And you show this stuff to a group of people who are critiquing it, so you are
06:11actually taking some pretty hard knocks,
06:13like "this really sucks" and, you know, "it's bad"
06:17Pete: Yeah, I mean, Anne: and you have to fix it.
06:20Pete Docter: We have a pretty unique situation because we've got these other
06:24amazing filmmakers, Brad Bird and Andrew Stanton and John Lasseter, and they are
06:28all on-staff. And so while I am working on my movie, we have this sort of cycle
06:32where we close off and we work just by ourselves, a very small group.
06:36And then when we feel fairly strong about it, we'll put it up on the screen,
06:39invite all these other guys in, and then we go up and have very frank
06:43discussions about the parts that work and the parts that don't.
06:47And the cool thing is they will all throw out ideas.
06:51They poke at stuff and even with John, who is our Creative Executive, there is
06:57no mandate like "You have to do this."
07:00It's always "Just make it better."
07:02We can take their suggestion or not.
07:04All we have to do is make it better, which is hard enough as it is, but
07:08it's pretty unique.
07:10Anne: Geoffrey, what's your - you have written many, many screen-
07:14people keep saying "This is his first screenplay" and I go "I think he has written a few before." Explain that.
07:20Geoffrey Fletcher: Yeah, well I wrote a lot - "Out In The Wilderness" of original material without -
07:29between film school and Precious and I didn't have an agent and I just
07:33wrote, and wrote, and wrote.
07:36To this day, I am still not sure why. Almost looking back "you're a crazy man."
07:40Anne: You were holding down temp jobs,
07:42Anne: in New York. Geoffrey: Yep. That's right.
07:44Geoffrey: Working all sorts of jobs and it was tough, but I wouldn't trade it because the
07:51things I learned on thing those jobs,
07:54those were real jobs with the real people, and it really helped a lot with
07:58writing this, but also the persistence to keep writing with very little positive
08:04reinforcement really helped me understand who Precious was on a deeper level.
08:09I mean, every day she had to muster the strength to get through.
08:15So this, as my first adaptation -
08:22the original material helped a lot, when sort of straying away from what was
08:28there and reinventing.
08:31And people would come up to me, even in production team, they'll confuse
08:36things that were in the book and things that were added, and that, to me, was one of the
08:40great compliments they would give, to sort of slip organically into her,
08:44Sapphire's universe.
08:47But during the writing, I had filters on.
08:50Well, actually, during the reading of the book, I had filters on.
08:53I am trained as a director, and so I would look for everything in that
08:57book that could be dramatized cinematically, or visually, and things that didn't belong.
09:08So a lot of it was what didn't belong there and then there are other departures
09:16that I took based on studying psychology as an undergrad.
09:20Some of these flights of fantasy from trauma, creating some new characters and -
09:27Anne: So the fantasy sequences, for example, were not on the book?
09:30Geoffrey: At one moment, early on, Precious mentions the idea of being in a music video.
09:35And I thought "Okay, well when she is struggling, I mean when she is undergoing
09:41these terribly - these terrible moments, great. That's the escape she has created for her."
09:46And then I thought, secondly, "It'll be a great escape for the audience," and then
09:51on a third level, I thought, "Well here is a way to organically incorporate a
09:54visual cinematic element to this film."
09:58So, you know, throughout, also I had a mindset, like yes this is a very specific person in a
10:06specific place, but like a lot of art that's effective, it can be both really
10:12specific and ultra universal.
10:14I thought of her as Odysseus, or Huck Finn, or Celie from The Color Purple and
10:19in part, this is a story about a young women who is going through a tough, tough
10:26time, but it only happens to be set in Harlem,
10:30so I felt resurrected, just to be working on something I cared about and
10:37something that might get made. I didn't know if anyone - if it would be made, or seen, or
10:42even widely seen, but I did know that I was never more fulfilled to work on
10:47anything in my life.
10:49Anne: Alex, your task with your partner, Roberto Orci, who you have been working with,
10:55I mean you've known him since you are in high school, and you have done all of
10:59your movies together,
11:00the Transformers and "Mission Impossible 3."
11:06This one was a challenge, in terms of resurrecting, the genre term in our
11:11industry is "rebooting" a very, very, very familiar universe.
11:17And it seemed like what you were able to do was go back and find those characters
11:21and figure out how to make them work again.
11:24Would you talk about that?
11:25Alex Kurtzman: Sure.
11:28I think that there were five of us in the process of determining where we were
11:36going to find the rhythm and the emotion and the balance of Star Trek.
11:39and that Bob and I have been partners since we were in high school and when I
11:44first met him, he had an Enterprise phone that would ring in his room.
11:50So that was his level of fandom.
11:51He knew every show, every quote, every character from the original series on
11:57through with the films.
11:59I was very struck by "The Wrath of Khan" when I saw it, just at the exact right
12:03time, and up to that point in my life, I did not think that anybody could beat
12:07Darth Vader as a villain.
12:09And then Khan came along and put that thing in Chekov's ear
12:12and it was like, okay.
12:15(Laughter)
12:17And then JJ was very kind of not - he was like, "I am Star Wars guy."
12:24I was like, "I am Star Wars guy, too!
12:25Great, let's put some of that in there."
12:27And I don't know that's sacrilege, but it's true.
12:29Alex: And then Damon was equally loud, vocal Anne: Lindelof
12:36Alex: Damon Lindelof was equally loud, vocal and
12:37passionate about protecting canon and then Berkey really was a wonderful
12:43objective outsider who had no connection to Trek really.
12:45So between the 5 of us, we all, I think, represented a pretty of good cross
12:49section of the audience.
12:50And then talking about story, Bob and I would go off and we would break story
12:53together. We'd come back and we'd present our ideas.
12:56And we'd actually write an act and then we'd find some new turn and then
12:59present a new idea.
13:01And we got to have that checks and balances, which was wonderful because, as a
13:07writer who was, I think, very fortunate to have been trained and mentored by
13:15writing producers, it was an incredible safety net,
13:17especially when it came to a franchise that was very divisive.
13:23I mean, hardcore Trekkers or Trekkies, or however you would want to classify
13:28yourself, were angry that we would even take - the Transformers guys.
13:33They are going to turn it into a Michael Bay film and I think that we, initially, said
13:39"There is no way we are going to do this.
13:40We can't take this job." And we passed for about 8 months. Collectively, we passed.
13:45And then we thought about it and we thought, "The reason that we are passing
13:49is because we so desperately want to protect this thing that we love that - it was too scary.
13:57But then we realized that's exactly why we have to do it, because if we don't
14:00protect it and someone else does this and we go to that theater and hate it,
14:03then the person most culpable will be us.
14:05So we said, "Okay. Let's do this."
14:08Jason: If not us, then who? If not now, then when?
14:15(Laughter)
14:16Alex: True, true.
14:18By the way, I am jealous of your hair.
14:19I just want to go on record and say that.
14:23Anne: Between you and Bob, you are the character man, as I understand it, and he is
14:30the science geek.
14:32Alex: Well, the funny thing is, Bob has always been very sort of logical
14:37Anne: He's Spock and you're...
14:38Alex: The great irony of this was
14:40we were about halfway though the script and
14:42we got to the point where Kirk and Spock argue about what to do after Vulcan
14:45has been destroyed and we knew that this was going to be the axis, in some ways,
14:51around which the whole movie spun, because it was going to all come down due to this argument.
14:54And they we are going to have to separate and come back together and we
14:58were debating. Sometimes what we will do is we will go to a hotel room and
15:04we will order room service.
15:05We will lock in and we will spend our days writing - take the phone out of the wall.
15:09And so we were in the middle of that process and we were having this huge
15:12argument about what the scene should be and then we were like, "Jesus, This is the scene!"
15:16Type!
15:17(Laughter)
15:18So we started typing as fast as possible and that became the scene and really,
15:22it never changed.
15:24So we were very lucky that way and I think that we didn't really know it,
15:27but now 20 years that Bob and I've been writing together, in many ways, were
15:32building up to the moment of getting to inherit something that we loved so much
15:37as kids so that we could give to our kids and that's kind of why it ended up
15:42being, I think, something that we love doing.
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Personal writing process (cont.)
00:00(Music playing.)
00:07Anne Thompson: So Nancy, with "It's Complicated," as I recall, you were setting out to make a
00:13movie that was absolutely as funny as it could possibly be.
00:17And what's your writing process in trying to make that happen?
00:23You shut yourself up at home?
00:25Nancy Meyers: It's funny that you say that. I must have said that to you, but, actually, I always
00:30think of my movies as being really tragic when I'm coming up with them.
00:33Well, because sometimes if you - when I describe them to myself, as I'm writing,
00:38I see nothing funny in them at all.
00:40So the challenge is, yeah, I think in any scene the character could cry or could laugh.
00:46So I did want just to challenge myself to try to write a movie that worked
00:53comedically in sort of a full throttle kind of way, for me, for what I do.
00:58So when I listen to you, Pete, I'm sort of jealous when I think that you could
01:02leave your room and go talk to people, or have a book or have some direction.
01:10Because it's a long and lonely process when you're - which is why I tend to see it
01:15tragically I think, at times.
01:16So you do want a little pat on the back once in a while.
01:22So on a rare, rare, rare occasion, I'll send a page off to somebody and I'll say,
01:27Does this work? Do you think this could be funny?
01:30But basically, for me, I wanted to write a movie about divorce, but none of
01:36the getting a divorce stuff, none of the custody stuff, none of that stuff that you've seen,
01:40but sort of being a divorced person is never really talked about in movies and
01:47a lot of people are divorced and we have really oddball relationships with
01:51people as a result, one of them being the ex.
01:54And so my brain went into the what-if possibility of what if 10 years later you
02:02had an affair with this person.
02:05(Laughter)
02:08And it then started to get pretty funny to me, and then I started to see a lot
02:15of very comic possibilities.
02:17So the process was - I do a really, really long outline.
02:23I spent months and months outlining, and I put everything in the outline I can think of.
02:28It's the conversations you have in the hotel room.
02:30You just go back and forth with yourself and sometimes I, in an argument scene,
02:36I'll take out a legal pad and draw a line down in the middle -
02:38he thinks, she thinks.
02:42And I always tried to make the scenes really valid when Alec and Meryl work together.
02:47I wanted that relationship to work.
02:49I rooted for them.
02:51I tried to write the best I could in ways they could get back together, but then
02:55true character things would come out that would make that impossible and then
03:00it turns into a script.
03:01And then, on this movie, I actually thought "I think I'm going to bring in a
03:05producer because I write and direct and produce" and I went to Scott Rudin and I
03:10said, "Would you produce this movie with me?" because I really wanted somebody just
03:13to - and then he would call me everyday and I would never tell him anything.
03:16Anne: You were withholding. Nancy: He called me every single day with "How'd it go?"
03:22Nancy: Good. Pretty good. I don't know, maybe bad.
03:26I just, I never really could have any answer for how it was going.
03:31I don't think we know. I don't think we know, really.
03:32Anne: And I know you and Jason, I had a question for both of you.
03:37I mean, were you writing with particular people in mind as to play the roles?
03:42Nancy: I always do.
03:43Otherwise I see myself.
03:45So it's really essential.
03:47So I glommed on to Meryl Streep, who I didn't know, but when I could picture her
03:54I could picture her doing things I would never do, couldn't do.
03:57She is much braver, stronger, smarter.
04:00She would figure out a way to pull it off and yes, that helped me enormously.
04:05It really helped me enormously and I thought of Alec a lot, too.
04:10I find when you have - I don't know about you, or any of you, but when you have an actor in mind,
04:14it pushes you a little bit, just pushes you.
04:16You get braver or you can get funnier or you know they can make it work.
04:23It helps me a lot.
04:24Then you have to actually get them, or you have spent year being an idiot.
04:30Anne: So we will go to Scott first and then Jason, if you want to address that issue as well.
04:38So you work with a partner, Michael, and you have worked together before?
04:44Scott Neustadter: This is the second script we ever wrote, yeah, we -
04:47Anne: So Pink Panther 2 being - Scott: No, no, no, no, no, no.
04:49Anne: or that was you alone? Scott: No, that was us together.
04:52Scott: That was all him. (Laughter)
04:55We wrote that after this.
05:02This was really the first thing that we - I moved here and we'd given up
05:08working in movies.
05:10I used to work in development in New York.
05:12I hired him as my intern, like ten years ago, and we just sort of had the same taste,
05:16so we always would write scenes together and make jokes and that's how that started.
05:22We were friends first.
05:23And I quit the business and I went to business school in Europe and was done with this.
05:28And I met this girl.
05:30If you saw the movie.
05:31I had to write about it and so I would email him back in New York and say
05:36"Can you believe this?"
05:37And he'd be like, "This is good. This is juicy."
05:39And so we were, do you think about an actor when you write?
05:44We were just thinking about me.
05:46I was writing about myself.
05:49He was writing about me.
05:50I'm sure he even loved that and we just didn't think it was a movie.
05:55We didn't think it was something that anyone was going to ever read.
06:00I had to do it and I hated my job in LA so much when I moved here, that I
06:06finally said, "You know what? If I don't show people this script and they like it,
06:11I will probably end up moving back East."
06:14So we kind of got lucky and they liked the script and this is what happened.
06:19Anne: Now you were writing the parts about the guy who was being miserable and he was
06:25Anne: writing about the good parts, the romantic parts? Scott: No,
06:26Scott: he loved the miserable parts too.
06:29Jason Reitman: It's more fun to write that stuff.
06:31Scott Neustadter: Yes, it's the anger. The first -
06:33I mean it really started when things were fresh and I was really pissed off.
06:37And the more we would work on it, the more distance there was and we would
06:42be able to separate kind of fresh pain from little bit of a maturation that was going on.
06:50And the tone of the entire movie and the script shifts halfway through when
06:54the character starts to think back on things a little differently, which is what we were doing.
07:00The whole thing is non-fiction and it's kind of amazing because when we watch it now,
07:05we're like, "Oh remember, we were going through that." And it's pretty -
07:07Anne: Were you going though musical numbers?
07:10Scott: Yes, absolutely.
07:12It's a story of someone who is really influenced by pop-culture and when he
07:16thinks about stuff, it always is filtered through like the movies that he
07:21watches and the music that he listens to and all those things, and that's me.
07:24The night that you finally get the girl, the next morning is the greatest day ever.
07:33So we said what would that entail?
07:35And it would be a big fat musical number and we had Hall and Oates themselves
07:38walking down the - singing to them.
07:41It's funny, Joe, the actor, he said, "I felt like this and this is just
07:47sort of, who doesn't feel like that when something great is going on?"
07:52Anne: But you were going to cut out the ninja numbers?
07:54Scott: We did have a ninja battle at one point. Yeah, that is true.
07:59I don't remember even what that was to do with anything.
08:02(Laughter)
08:03"Anything goes," that was our sort of attitude and yeah, thankfully, there is no ninja battle.
08:08Jason: Is that when things are good or when things are bad, you fight ninjas?
08:11Scott: I think yeah, no, he died in the scene. Things were bad. Things were bad. Wasn't so good.
08:18Anne Thompson: How did you figure out the fracturing of time?
08:20Scott: The only way in which I thought it was a screenplay versus an extended diary rant
08:29was when I came up with the idea of like, "What if we told it this way?"
08:32One of the first thoughts that I had was like you could show what ended up being
08:37the IKEA scene.
08:38If you've seen the movie, he makes a joke and we show it when things are
08:43terrible and you're like, what is up?
08:45Then you see hundreds of days earlier when things are fantastic because they
08:49are new and exciting.
08:50He makes the exact same joke and it goes fantastic.
08:53So the fracturing of the narrative and the way you tell the story, you could only
08:57do that - because of the way that we were telling it,
09:02we can get away with stuff like that.
09:03You could see the juxtaposition in it and we have a little bit more meaning,
09:07than if you saw it an hour apart.
09:08So we love the freedom of being able to do stuff like that.
09:12Anne: Jason, what's your writing method on a day to day? -
09:18this one had a strange sort of trajectory because you kept going back to it.
09:23Jason: It's like being lost in the desert.
09:25I honestly think that's often how writing feels, even when you're adapting.
09:33I started writing this seven years ago.
09:34I wanted to write a movie about a bunch of things.
09:37It was funny to hear you kind of talk about knowing that you wanted to have
09:41a guy in an house and you know you wanted to have this bird and like - because
09:44I think a lot of writing comes in that way.
09:47You know you want to write about five or six different things and you're
09:50wondering if they're going to end up fitting all into the same movie.
09:54I wanted to write about the idea of being alone.
09:59I wanted to actually defend the idea of being alone, and see if I
10:02could accomplish that.
10:04I wanted to write about the idea of collecting things, collecting the
10:07meaningless things that we seem to do just to fill our life to make us think
10:11that our life is complete and airline miles seemed perfect for that.
10:16I wanted to write about female midlife crisis in a way that I thought I'd seen a
10:22lot of male midlife crisis on screen, but not a lot of female midlife crisis.
10:25I wanted to write about particularly the kind of identity crisis that I saw my
10:34wife go through as a woman with a business degree who was career woman who
10:40became a wife and mom
10:42and is trying to balance these ideas of what was going to be the focus for our life.
10:45I wanted to write a movie about a guy who experienced the need for romance through loss,
10:53that somehow, this was going to be the movie where instead of feeling like this guy
10:57wanted to be in love when you see him dancing at a wedding, the most important
11:01moment is actually when he realizes this love is actually not available to him.
11:06It is at that moment that we know he wants something more and perhaps we, as an
11:09audience, want something more as well.
11:13I found this book that spoke to a lot of these ideas and I find that's how
11:18adapting works for me
11:19is that I have stuff that's kind going through my head and then I find an
11:24author who speaks to it in a very articulate way, who has language that I did
11:27not have and we become collaborators, whether the author knows it or not.
11:34It becomes this exchange of ideas.
11:37In this movie, it was strange because over seven years,
11:39I mean, I was writing a movie about loneliness, but over these seven years, I met
11:44my wife and I fell in love and I had a daughter, and I began to learn, for me at
11:50least, what was important in life, and it had an enormous influence.
11:53I started writing this movie and then I stopped. And I made Thank You for
11:56Smoking, then I went back to writing it and I stopped and I made Juno.
11:59And then I finally came back, and each time I went back to write, my life had
12:03made these kind of enormous jumps.
12:06As far as writing for actors, I completely agree.
12:13It just changes the way you think of the characters.
12:15It gives them a voice in a way that otherwise cannot be.
12:19I wrote "Up in the Air" for eight or nine of the actors
12:22that ended up playing characters, and not only George Clooney and Vera Farmiga
12:27and Anna Kendrick, but Zach Galifianakis and J.K. Simmons and Amy Morton, who I
12:32saw in August: Osage County on Broadway,
12:34and just went, "Oh my god, that's Ryan's sister."
12:37As soon as you identify that voice, it really brings the character to life and all
12:40of sudden, you really know they would respond to anything.
12:43It really defines them.
12:44Anne: Have you ever done that and not gotten the part filled with the right person?
12:48Jason: Oh, I offered Thank You for Smoking to George Clooney.
12:53He had no interest in playing that role.
12:58No, certainly. I think when I wrote Thank You for Smoking, originally, I wrote it
13:02as the anti-Jerry Maguire.
13:04So for me, the perfect guy was Tom Cruise, who is - I thought Nick Naylor and
13:09Jerry Maguire are like two sides of the same coin.
13:13So, no. Certainly, that's often the case.
13:17I'm not presumptuous enough to think that George Clooney was going to say yes to me.
13:20I'm just lucky that he did.
13:21Anne: You trucked out to Italy to his house to get him to read the script.
13:26Jason: Well, I went to his house under the idea that he had read the script, and then I
13:29showed up and he said, "What are you working on these days?"
13:32(Laughter)
13:37Anne: There was a happy ending.
13:38Jason: Yeah, two days later, wondering like- well, I'm in Como with my wife and this
13:44is wonderful, but what the hell is going on here?
13:47He walked up to me,
13:48out of nowhere, and just said, "I've just read it. It's great. I'm in."
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Overcoming challenges
00:00(Music playing.)
00:07Anne Thompson: Often, there comes a point when you are writing a screenplay where
00:10something really isn't working and it's messing you up and you go into
00:15some kind of tailspin.
00:17I am assuming this has happened to all of you.
00:19Mark, on "The Hurt Locker," did you find there is this sort of strategic disaster
00:25in the writing of it that you had to solve?
00:29Mark Boal: Well, I don't know about a disaster, but I had somebody that we were trying to
00:35get in the movie, in Hurt Locker, and that was Ralph Fiennes.
00:39And he and Kathryn had worked together and it was important that he be in the
00:43movie to trigger the financing.
00:45And so, you know, being somewhat familiar with his work, I wrote this part for
00:50him as an ambassador, the British ambassador,
00:54this long complicated scene where he would get this really talky part and
00:58really rip apart these American soldiers and show their naivety about foreign
01:01policy and all of this stuff.
01:02Now I thought, "This is right up his alley."
01:04So he read it and we had lunch.
01:06And he said, "This is just awful and terrible.
01:09"And you know, I love the screenplay, but this terrible.
01:14"I would never do this and, you know, I have family that has personal experience
01:20"with this kind of job and nothing could be further from the truth and no
01:23"representative of the UK would ever speak like this," and so.
01:26That was kind of a disastrous moment in the development process and somehow it
01:34came out, over the course of the lunch, that what he would be interested in would
01:37be something where he didn't have to wear a suit and he had this idea that maybe
01:42he could be a mercenary.
01:44And so really in desperation to get that actor on board, I created this scene
01:53which people often, this sort of desert sequence in the movie, and people will
01:56sometimes say like "Why is there this mercenary sequence in the middle of a bomb movie?"
02:03And I have never really told the truth about this before, but...
02:06(Laughter)
02:08that's the reason.
02:10Anne: It's so interesting that in this movie that the stars are killed off very
02:15quickly and you cast the rest of the movie with relative unknowns.
02:18Mark: Well yeah, that was, you know, Kathryn really wanted to cast it that way in
02:24order to emphasize the realism of the script and the shooting style and the whole
02:29idea was to make it sort of feel as naturalistic as possible and if you don't have--
02:34if you don't, you know, have Tom Cruise.
02:37If you have Tom Cruise, you are going to assume that he is going to live
02:39through most of the film, given that you have probably spent some money on getting him there.
02:43And so with unknown actors that would be more tense and then we had Ralph, and we
02:50had him for a couple of days,
02:51so the easiest way to get rid of him was to kill him.
02:54(Laughter)
02:56And that was true with a lot of them,
02:58(Laughter) Mark: but it also, I don't know,
03:01but it also, I think, just the
03:04inverting the normal values that you place, as an audience member, on cast.
03:09And when she cast Jeremy, that was another sort of nearly - well, it was just a
03:14difficult moment for me because I had seen Jeremy in Dahmer and I was kind of
03:21shocked that he had become William James, who I always thought of this like
03:24classic sort of, you know, charismatic American loner type and Dahmer is,
03:31Geoffrey, he plays Geoffrey Dahmer, and he is extremely convincing as like the most
03:34evil repressed man, you know, on the universe, on the planet.
03:40But so I did rewrite the character a little bit when after I met Jeremy and
03:42realized that he was actually a nice guy and a very funny guy.
03:48I rewrote that James character a little bit to have - to sort of, in some ways,
03:53accommodate his range and so he became a somewhat more jocular character than he
03:59was in first conception.
04:02Anne: Geoffrey, did you have a real sticking point in the writing process that sort
04:08of stymied you?
04:09Geoffrey Fletcher: Well, I am going to just start off by saying there's
04:12something Jason touched upon earlier about the book in that it has such a
04:17huge following, religious, but I wasn't fully aware of the following, which
04:26helped a great deal,
04:29a great deal.
04:30So I thought, "Well, I can do whatever I want."
04:32This is just a cool book and it inspired so many things.
04:36I am not afraid to jump here and jump there and only towards the end of the
04:39process did I realize how much it meant to so many people.
04:43But I think one of the big things was this book has a sort of a force behind it.
04:50So it's brutal, graphic at times.
04:55So how do we keep its impact, but really make it accessible?
05:00So I thought, "Well, this is cinema."
05:03So if we show a glimpse here, a glimpse there, a glimpse there, the audience
05:07will connect the dots and they will do so in a way that we could never do.
05:12I guess like a lot of the old horror films, where you would scare yourself.
05:16Here is just that little drips and drabs.
05:19Also to add dimension to the villain, the main villain, really both the mother
05:28and the father, but there is scene for the father that was ultimately, it
05:32doesn't appear in the final film, but can we give a little bit of understanding
05:39or dimension to this mother.
05:41Yes, she is a monster, but, here and there, she touches upon an interesting point.
05:49At one point in the script, which may or may not be in the film - I don't think it is,
05:53Precious points out her mother is crazy but not stupid.
05:56And then at the very end, people tell me "You know, I almost felt sorry for her,"
06:05and that's okay to have - I think Harrison Ford once said he picks his scripts
06:13based on the quality of the villain and so beyond that, the other difficulties
06:21I think everyone up here maybe can relate to the Death Valley that the
06:26second act is or can be. So...
06:28Anne: And Alex, what was your biggest issue?
06:34Alex Kurtzman: Well, actually jumping in off second act, I think there was - the choice to
06:45destroy Vulcan was a major choice for us and it was something that we had to
06:48really keep quiet because we knew that if fans heard we were destroying
06:52Vulcan, it was over.
06:56And the other thing was that we had to get Leonard Nimoy on board and we knew
07:01that the movie could not exist.
07:02So we had to endeavor to write the screenplay as a giant act of faith that
07:07he would do it.
07:09We sat down with him early in the process, after we kind of had this story in general.
07:13We didn't have where it was all going to lay out, but we kind of knew what it was going to be.
07:17And the title, I don't know if anyone of you has ever read this, but the title
07:22of his autobiography is "I am not Spock."
07:24So he had said, "I am not going to do this anymore. This is done."
07:30And we were like, "Okay, well the only way we can do this is with -" so we brought
07:33him in and we sat down and there were few pleasantries.
07:38It was like, "Okay, so what you have got?"
07:40Okay, so we pitched him and like "and then you blow up your planet and then all
07:46the Vulcans are basically wiped out."
07:48And then he was sort of listening and when we talked him through it and everyone
07:51was chiming in and jumping in and going through the pitch.
07:53And dead silence after we were done, and we were like, "Oh man, it's over.
07:58We can't do this movie."
07:59And he started to cry and we were like, "Oh my God, what's happening?"
08:04He said, "You have to understand how emotional this is for me," because we
08:08realized we f**king had him.
08:09And he was in, but we had to write the script now and we realized in that moment
08:16that we were asking the gunslinger to slap on his pistols one last time.
08:21So the destruction of Vulcan and where it landed in our minds was the sort of
08:28the end of act two.
08:30The end of act two low point was Vulcan is destroyed and then they have to go
08:33after Nero and take him back.
08:35And we were really stuck,
08:37for some reason. We didn't understand why we are so stuck, but the story was not
08:40laying out in the way we needed it to.
08:42We couldn't get the emotional beats.
08:43We couldn't hit the emotional beats.
08:44Everything was wrong.
08:45And we realized that the problem was that that needed to be the midpoint of the movie.
08:50Because it was such a huge event to recover from, there was not enough time to
08:55get to where everybody need to get too emotionally.
08:57You needed an hour for the audience to accept it, for the characters to accept
09:01it and for the upswing to be possible, because it was such a down point.
09:04So that was a weird one because, you know, usually, if you are looking at a
09:07typical three-act structure for these kinds of movies, which have very little
09:12room for deviation, your low point has to be there.
09:15And our high point actually begins at the end of act two because the story low
09:21point is there, but it actually lead us to the scene where Kirk has to jump
09:27Spoke off the bridge and take over as Captain.
09:29So while that was the low point, it was also a high point because the audience
09:32was hoping and waiting for that moment to come.
09:34So that was our biggest hurdle to get past.
09:38Anne: But you were also were fooling around with time in a very ladder and theme way.
09:42So that's sort of how you dealt with it in a way, right?
09:44Alex: Yeah, I mean the time travel element was obviously an old staple of Star Trek,
09:50so we knew that we had to pay - but it's also a cheat, you know.
09:53Like we had to be very careful that we did not use it as a cheat and trying to
09:57stay true to canon and honoring canon, we realized that creating an alternate
10:04time-line would allow us to be able to say that everything that you have seen on Star Trek existed.
10:08We didn't want to do a reinvention.
10:11We didn't really want - it's a prequel and it's a sequel in that it - half of the movie takes...
10:15So it's a "sprequel."
10:16That's what we used to call it.
10:18And it ended up we had to find the balance there and the way to use time travel
10:23in a way that people wouldn't be offended by and that ended up giving us amazing
10:26story possibilities we just didn't know we were going to have.
10:29Anne: And Nancy, did you have a real sticking point in the process of writing this?
10:34Nancy Meyers: Well, you know, I wrote about an affair, which, if you read the
10:40newspaper, people don't like.
10:42People don't like people that have - people don't like people who have affairs.
10:47My lead character was going to have an affair with the married man who she had
10:53been married to, but still he is married to somebody else, and he is a new father to her child.
10:59So, it was risky, you know.
11:02I think the whole time I was writing, I was aware that they are having an affair
11:08and I had to keep balancing that and keep - the way I dealt with it was I had
11:15the character talk about it -
11:18how wrong it was and she talked to her friends about it.
11:20She talked to her psychiatrist about it.
11:23She talked to him about it.
11:25And I felt by balancing that and keep talking about it kept it - because you
11:30know, as soon as the audience is thinking something and you are up on the
11:33screen, you know, you have to sort of get that they are thinking that.
11:37So if you put it up there and you deal with it, then I think they can enjoy the
11:40movie and get on with it.
11:42And then after going through all that, she doesn't end up with him.
11:46And in classic romantic comedies, when they were wonderful, and there were exes
11:52involved, like "The Philadelphia Story" or "The Awful Truth" or any of the great
11:55ones, you always end up with the ex because he makes his case, you realize
11:59you've made a mistake and you get back together.
12:02And she also doesn't end up with him
12:04after putting the audience through it and at a certain point, they are rooting for them.
12:07Kids are involved, you know, and so I found that challenging too, you know, to
12:12make that okay that she doesn't end up with him and not to make him a villain.
12:16Anne: And did you think when you were writing about pot smoking that this would
12:19earn you an R-rating?
12:20Nancy: No! I had no idea.
12:23I had no - I mean I was actually stunned.
12:26Jason Reitman: Did you get an R for pot smoking - Anne: Yes
12:28Jason: and pot smoking alone? Nancy: No, no.
12:30I got an R because there were no bad repercussions from smoking pot,
12:36In other words, there was not a moment where they said "Let's never do that again!"
12:40(Laughter)
12:43But you know, the point I made to the up to the MPA was, on the other hand,
12:47no one brings it up.
12:48Nobody says "Hey where did you get it? Can I have some more?"
12:50I mean, it was so clearly a one-time thing.
12:52It was like getting drunk once.
12:54You are not going to get drunk every day.
12:56You know, it was - and they both said they hadn't done it in 27 years.
13:01These are not potheads.
13:02Mark: Did they propose, by the way, a consequence that would have been -
13:04Nancy: Well it was too late.
13:06Nancy: The movie was made, done. Mark: The movie was cut.
13:07You know, I couldn't write in a consequence,
13:10even though Steve Martin said to me, "Should I come in and loop? 'Ooh, That was something.'"
13:14I said, "Where am I going to put that?"
13:15Mark: Right after the baking of the croissant. Oh God!
13:18Nancy: Right as I'm about to kiss you. Anne: This is so wrong.
13:21Nancy: This is so wrong. Yes! (Laughter)
13:23That is what I think he is going to say 'because that was not a good thing to do.'
13:27Nancy: But that's - yeah. No, I thought that was wild. Anne: Yeah.
13:32Jason: Would you have gone further if you knew you were getting an R?
13:35Jason: Would you have started to like, uh Nancy Meyers: No.
13:37Anne Thompson: You could have shown us all of Alec Baldwin.
13:38Jason: There is a scene where they are doing meth.
13:42Jason: I mean, it just gets out of control.
13:44(Laughter) Nancy Meyers: No!
13:45Scott Neustadter: That'd be a consequence.
13:47Nancy: Well there is a little thing where, you know Scott: It's a gateway drug.
13:49Alec and John Krasinski,
13:51he's shot gun - it's a little, you know, there is a little moment that the boys
13:55improvise, which I thought was hilarious and I thought, "I will take it out."
13:58I know I can never keep it.
13:59So I said - I offered that up, but they said, "It's the whole 11 minutes,
14:04that's the problem."
14:05I said, "Oh good, then that stays!"
14:06because I thought that was really funny, but no.
14:10Anne Thompson: So Scott, how about you?
14:14Scott Neustadter: Ay, I don't even like to think about it.
14:17We had nothing but roadblocks.
14:19I mean we had all these ideas, but we really didn't have a story.
14:25We were just - it was one person's whiny rant for awhile.
14:30And we had like a 110 page first act and that's where we realized,
14:35(Laughter) "Wow. This is going nowhere."
14:40Some of it is funny, some of it is horrible.
14:42Where are we going?
14:43And we didn't know!
14:45And one day, I am going to ruin the movie for everybody, but one day this
14:49thing happened in real life, which is this girl got married and that was
14:54impossible. That could not be.
14:57And so for me, who is still kind of reeling from the breakup and had been
15:01convinced that you know, love, there is no such thing, it's all whatever.
15:07This person who helped me get to that place found love and got married and lived
15:11happily ever after, and there was no way.
15:13And we realized when that happened, that's the story we are telling.
15:16We are telling the story of really the minute when you say there is no such
15:20thing, then there is no such thing as there is not such thing and that was the
15:24theme and we worked towards that and we went back and looked at, you know is
15:28that what was story we were telling and it was always the story we were telling,
15:30we just didn't know it and that was the revelation.
15:35Anne Thompson: Jason?
15:36Jason: The most important thing for me was authenticity and that was the - it's not really
15:46a roadblock, but that's what I faced on a daily basis and that's what I wanted to accomplish.
15:50I mean, I look down at everyone on this panel and that's one of the great
15:54elements of every screenplay here is how authentic and relatable they are,
16:00no matter what they are about.
16:01I mean, even in the case of "Up," which is about a man in a house with balloons,
16:04flying to a fictional place in South America,
16:08it's not about the authenticity of would, you know, the house actually fly?
16:11It's about the authenticity of, do we believe in the idea of wondering if we
16:19have had enough adventure in our life and looking back and having those kind of regrets?
16:23And that's a thing that everybody understands and for that reason, it has to be
16:25authentic or we're going to call it BS.
16:28And every movie here has that, and I certainly wanted that for my own
16:33film and I knew I was dealing with elements that were outside of my personal experience.
16:38Two strong examples.
16:39One was these feelings I knew my wife was having, again, as a career woman who
16:49was still trying to kind of figure herself out.
16:52And I remember one night we sat down and I said, "Honey I have to write this
16:56"scene and I need your help with it. And I want you to have a conversation with
17:00"yourself, of you now and your 16 year old self, and I want you to talk about what
17:05you look for in a man."
17:07And first she described what she looks for in a man now.
17:12Thankfully, there was some resemblance to me and then she described this man
17:19that she was in love with at 16, who had no resemblance to me.
17:22He was just, you know, he was as tall as Pete, and golden hair and had a
17:28golden retriever and loved to go outdoors on the weekend and had a Land Rover
17:33and worked in finance,
17:35had a college degree, unlike me! I mean, you know and --
17:39Mark: But wait. This is seriously your dinner table conversation with your wife?
17:41(Laughter)
17:42Jason Reitman: Now, the scarier version of this was on Juno.
17:46On Juno, there was an argument that had to happen between a husband and wife and I
17:51talked to Diablo about it.
17:52I said, "I think we need to have a scene here at the end where they get into an
17:55argument and I have some suggestions for it."
17:57So I went to my wife and I said, "I would like to have an argument with you.
18:03"And this is for the script and we know going in this is for the script,
18:09but if I were to say this, what would you say?"
18:13She said "I would say this," and I said, "Okay.
18:15Now if I responded by saying this," and it was actually a very scary scene.
18:20We kind of went through it and then we hugged and made up at the end and so
18:27that was one part of it.
18:28That was very important to me.
18:31It's honestly my favorite scene I have ever written and favorite scene I have
18:34ever directed and it is in large part to my wife.
18:38It's from me, just writing down everything she said.
18:40The other part was the experience of being laid off in this economy and as I was
18:44scouting this film, and I was in St. Louis and Detroit, two cities that just
18:47got pummeled this year, I would go to locations, office locations, that were
18:53available for shooting primarily because their departments had been laid off.
18:57And I would walk into an empty floor and there would just be telephones sitting
19:00on the ground, 15 feet apart where desks used to be, and there would be a room
19:05filled with abandoned chairs.
19:07You know, each one of these used to belong to a person that was no longer there.
19:11And I would talk to my father every night on the phone and he would say,
19:13"Look. You know, you are making one of the few documents of 2009 that says what
19:20"happened, that if you watch this movie 10-20 years from now, this will speak to
19:25"the economy of this year.
19:27"You have to get this right.
19:29"You have to capture this.
19:30This has to be in the details."
19:32And every night he would talk to me about what I needed to be keeping track of.
19:38He said, you know, take photos, take note of these things.
19:40These need to find a way into the film.
19:41And one night, during this conversation, I said, "What if we used people as well?"
19:45I kind of recognized that the weakest scenes in my screenplay were the firing scenes,
19:50that I don't know what it's like to be in the middle of my life and to be
19:55searching for opportunity when there really is none available.
19:59And I went to my casting director and said, "How can we find real people here
20:04who have lost their jobs, who'd be wiling to come and be in the film?"
20:08And she said, "Well why don't we put an ad out in the Help Wanted section."
20:12I thought, God that's frighteningly smart, and we did that. (Laughter)
20:18We got an enormous amount of responses.
20:20We said we were make a documentary so there wouldn't be any actors who were
20:25trying to kind of slip through.
20:27I wanted all non-actors and we narrowed it down to 25 people who are all in the
20:32film and they would start to say the kinds of things I would never think to
20:36write as a writer and they would say it in a way I would never think to direct
20:39them as a director and they - it's funny because you know, we sit here alone
20:44here, but we have co-writers throughout our life, whether they are our spouses or
20:50our bosses or, you know, the bully that beat us up as a kid or, in this case, these
20:5525 people who wrote some of the best dialog in the film.
20:59And there was one guy in particular.
21:01He said, he is in the movie, he goes, "What are you going to do this weekend?
21:05"You got gas in your tank. You got money in your wallet. You are going to take
21:09your kid to Chuck E. Cheese?"
21:10I just remember him saying that and I thought, wow!
21:14Well first of all, I have never thought of Chuck E. Cheese as a luxury, but
21:18more importantly, if I tried to write this, if I wrote this down, I would think I was being cute.
21:26And what he said it, it was 100% real.
21:30And it was really in capturing them that I really kind of found the soul of this movie.
21:38It happened on day four of our shoot and it just kind of carried with us
21:41throughout the rest.
21:42Anne: Well, I want to thank this extraordinary panel.
21:47You were great!
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