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I've come across these cool railroad cars. They're all stripped-down and skeletal for some reason. I have to imagine it had something to do with carrying grain around, because there's these big grain silos here. I've been trying to shoot them somehow. Now very often the way to work a shot is keep going in closer. As you go in closer, you simplify. You get down into details that are often very interesting and I've been trying that. I've been trying to work with the repeating textures of these shapes. I've been trying to work with the cool repetition of these cables, with the repetition of these lines, and yes, there's a lot of basic compositional stuff there that I can work with, but I'm just finding it kind of boring. It's too abstract.
You can't tell what this is if I get in too close. So then I thought, well, I need something recognizable to try and make this scene make a little more sense to the viewer. So I started getting down low, changing my point of view, thinking well, if I am working with the tracks, if I am working with the wheels, maybe then I can get something that's more interesting, and I am just not finding anything. Part of the problem is these are really long rectangular shapes and with the lens that I am working with, I've got wide-angle lenses here, it's a little harder to fit everything into frame.
If I had a more telephoto lens, I might be able to stand farther back and zoom in to compress some of the depth, and then I might be able to bring out more repetition, something like that. Or not, it may be that this is just a flawed idea, that this is a case where getting in closer is not the right idea. So I decided to give up on these trains and I started walking away, and when I did, I found this big pile of railroad ties over here. And I'm not especially interested in railroad ties, but these caught my eye because the sun was coming off the top of them, and there are these metal plates over here that were picking up the light.
And so I thought, all right, forget the train. I'll see if there's something interesting here. Very often finding a good shot is just about luck. It's also always about looking through the frame. I decided to try and frame a shot with the railroad ties and as soon as I did, I realized, oh, here's a way of capturing the train and capturing this whole scene and in the process trying to capture something of the feel of this part of town. I can use these railroad ties as an anchor for my composition and let the train and the grain silos fall in place behind it.
Very often, composition is simply about ordering the scene before you're ordering the world. I worked with a photographer one time named Bill Durrence who said, he thinks one of the reasons he likes photography so much is for that 1/100th of a second the shutter is closed, he is in complete control of the world. And that's kind of what composition is. It's your chance to put things in order so that the viewer has an easier time finding the way through the scene. So with these railroad ties as an anchor, I'm going to put them, and at this point.
I'm actually just following the rules. I'm putting them in my leftmost third. I'm making sure my focus and my depth of field are what I need to get some of what I want here in the background in focus, and now I am just working the shot and I'm going to keep doing that until I find something that I think works. So this is a case where getting in closer wasn't working, so I made a radical change and started getting far away. This is all part of a larger idea of really working a shot and seeing what you can find, and then applying your basic compositional rules to order the scene to try to capture this larger image.
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