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2011 SBIFF Writers' Panel: It Starts with the Script

2011 SBIFF Writers' Panel: It Starts with the Script

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As a sponsor of the 26th annual Santa Barbara International Film Festival, lynda.com is delighted to put you in the front row of four fascinating panel discussions with some of Hollywood's top filmmakers, including a number of Golden Globe, Emmy, Grammy, and Academy Award winners and nominees.

Moderated by Anne Thompson from indieWIRE, the It Starts with the Script panelists talk about the development of their films, their research before sitting down at the keyboard, the evolution of the script, and finally, getting it to the screen. What's clear is that there's no formula, no easy path, and no shortcuts. The writers candidly reveal the obstacles each overcame on the way to seeing their vision realized. The anecdotes range from stories of triumph over adversity to remarkable collaborative efforts to just plain luck. Panelists are Aaron Sorkin (The Social Network), Scott Silver (The Fighter), David Seidler (The King's Speech), Charlie Mitchell (Get Low), Lisa Cholodenko (The Kids Are All Right) and Michael Arndt (Toy Story 3).

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It Starts with the Script
The writer's journey
00:00(audience chatter)
00:04Male Speaker: Good Morning. Um, wow! This is a nice turnout. Um.
00:11First of all, I want to thank our first-ever presenting sponsor, lynda.com, and
00:21I think Lynda is here.
00:22Lynda, please stand up.
00:23(audience cheering, clapping)
00:29Thank you so much for helping the festival.
00:33Also, I want to thank the sponsor of today's panel, Pacifica Graduate Institute.
00:40So, this is a pretty exciting morning, It Starts with the Script,
00:45one of my favorite things we do with the festival. Let's start right away.
00:49Let me introduce Aaron Sorkin, The Social Network; Scott Silver, The Fighter;
01:04David Seidler, The King's Speech; Charlie Mitchell, Get Low; Lisa Cholodenko,
01:16The Kids Are All Right; and Michael Arndt, Toy Story 3; and your moderator,
01:29Anne Thompson of Thompson on Hollywood and indieWIRE.
01:34(clapping)
01:40Anne Thompson: Well, this is an incredible lineup, as always.
01:43I look forward to this panel every year because what we do is dig into the
01:46process a little bit.
01:47It's not just the sound bites that you've already become familiar with, but more
01:52about how these extraordinary screenplays, which are up for more awards and
01:57nominations and have won all sorts of things--
01:58I was just listening to David Seidler and Aaron Sorkin talk about what hotels to
02:03stay at in London for the BAFTAs coming up.
02:07This is what's really important.
02:10But we are going to go down to the very end there and start with Aaron Sorkin,
02:13who of course you know from all the television shows: The West Wing, Studio
02:1960 on the Sunset Strip, and you have a new series, I understand, HBO, coming up.
02:24Anne: Congratulations. Aaron Sorkin: Thank you.
02:25Anne: Tell us about that, just for the news of the moment.
02:28Aaron: I will. I have to say that it was-- I accidentally announced it when I wasn't
02:36supposed to. I was in London last week doing a program called, is it Breakfast with the
02:41BBC? BBC Breakfast?
02:43David Seidler: I think it's tea and crumpets, yes.
02:47(laughter)
02:50Aaron: I had just stepped off the plane and gone there, and we weren't supposed to
02:54announce it for a couple of weeks, but I went ahead and talked about it on
02:57the show, anyway.
02:58It'll be--so I will just say very little about it now, so I don't get in too much trouble.
03:04It'll be a new series for HBO that takes place behind the scenes, for a
03:09change, at a nightly cable news show where they have made a decision to try to
03:20do the news well.
03:22(laughter)
03:25Anne: A comedy series.
03:29David: It's a fantasy. Aaron: They will win sometimes, and they will lose sometimes.
03:32Anne: So Aaron, back to the beginning.
03:33You apparently were shown a script, a treatment, a proposal, a pitch--
03:38let's go all the way back--that you were so thrilled by that you called up your
03:42agent and said, "I want to do this right away."
03:44What was it that grabbed you, initially?
03:46Aaron: The pitch that you're talking about is Ben Mezrich wrote a 14-page book
03:51proposal for his publisher, Random House, about the origins of Facebook and the
03:56friction that took place at the beginning.
03:58Random House tried to get a simultaneous film deal set up so they sent it out to
04:03Hollywood, and that's how it got in my hands.
04:05And you are right, I did say, right away, it was fastest I'd ever said "yes" to anything.
04:11I am in.
04:13What grabbed me wasn't that it was about Facebook.
04:17I really didn't then, nor do I now, know very much about Facebook at all.
04:23What grabbed me was that set against this very modern backdrop of this
04:27very modern invention
04:28was a story that was as old as storytelling itself, of
04:31friendship and loyalty and betrayal and power and class and jealousy, these
04:36things that Escalus would have wanted to write about, Shakespeare would have
04:40wanted to write about,
04:41a few decades ago Paddy Chayefsky would have wanted to write about, and it was
04:46just lucky for me that none of those guys were available.
04:48So I got to write it.
04:49Anne: Scott Silver, you have quite a few screenwriting credits behind you and
04:56The Fighter was one of these situations where various different people were
05:00involved. So give us a little bit of where you came in and what had already developed at that stage.
05:07Scott: I was the fourth writer in I think on this, and a friend of mine, Darren
05:12Aronofsky, who went on and, obviously, did The Black Swan and I went to film school with
05:17came to me and asked if I would be interested in rewriting this.
05:20I am from Worcester, which is two towns over from Lowell where the movie takes
05:23place and I--Wow! Thank you.
05:25Someone here from Worcester, what are the chances of that?
05:30Yeah, and I have boxed a little bit, weirdly enough. Not very well.
05:38So it was natural for me to sort of have some interest in it.
05:41So that's sort of how I came on board.
05:44There had already been a number of drafts.
05:46So I felt sort of different from sort of how lot of these things work
05:49out, especially to get to here, but there were a lot of people before me that sort, of obviously, did work.
05:53Anne: But what would be the main, if you would have defined that main difference
05:57between what you did and what had previously been done?
06:00How would you describe that?
06:05Aaron: It's a compliment. (laughter) (garbled speech)
06:15Scott: I went back and sort of having been from there, I decided to go back and sort
06:18of interview. I sort of know those characters and know those people,
06:21so I went back to Lowell myself and went and did my own interviews and talked
06:26to those guys,
06:27Micky, and Dicky, and Alice, and the sisters and stuff, and went there and
06:31spent a few weeks in Lowell, and I think, took a lot of the ideas that were
06:37there in the first screenplay and then had to make it my own, but also make it into what Darren
06:44wanted to do as a movie.
06:45So it was really--I am trying to think that that's my answer to that. I did a lot.
06:50Anne: And after you, and when David Russell came in, what was your relationship
06:55to the project?
06:57Scott: This is also a complicated story.
07:01We had a to change what was very specifically made for Darren, and sort
07:05of what his vision was for the movie and making it a Darren Aronofsky movie in
07:09a very short time.
07:10I think we had about two months, or even less I think.
07:13We had to make it into a David O. Russell movie.
07:15We also had to cut about 50 or 60 millions dollars out of the budget.
07:20So it was sort of like this--having to sort of get it done really fast.
07:25So, I think the challenge, and
07:27I mean I think, from the movie, you can see how much it is David's sensibility,
07:33and David's rhythms and his perspective and his sense of humor
07:36on things.
07:37I think the heart of the story, I guess, had always been there from the
07:39very first draft.
07:41I mean I think the strength of the story is the strength of Micky and Dicky and
07:44their relationship and what they did in reality.
07:46I mean that's sort of true, and I think that transcended every script that
07:50was there.
07:51That story was so powerful. No matter who did it and how it was interpreted by
07:55Scott: whoever, that would have stayed. Anne: That's why it survived. Yeah.
07:57Scott: That was sort of--that heart was there.
08:02I think obviously they are very different filmmakers,
08:04so the challenge was to sort of make it David's movie, which he certainly did,
08:08but still keeping those elements that I think were important to me when I
08:12came aboard the project.
08:13Anne: Good! David Seidler, you have had a long career.
08:18You were born in England.
08:19You came to America.
08:20You lived and worked in Hollywood and television for a long time.
08:24You wrote Tucker for Francis Ford Coppola. And this story was something that you
08:30were drawn to from the very start of your life because you were a stutterer.
08:34What is the reason that it took so long for it to actually come to fruition, and
08:40what drove you to finally write it?
08:43David: I am a very slow writer. (laughter)
08:50When I first seriously thought about writing it, which was in 1980,
08:56I had just written Tucker:
08:58The Man and His Dream for Francis. I was a very naive 40 years old.
09:03I came to Hollywood at 40, an age when any writer with any sense is thinking
09:08of leaving town.
09:11When I wrote that script, I was naive enough to think that it would be
09:15made instantly, change my life forever, and I could write anything I wanted
09:19to in Hollywood.
09:20I certainly learned better than that.
09:23It took ten years to get made, and didn't change my life, and you can't write
09:26everything you want in Hollywood.
09:28But I started looking at Bertie because he had been my childhood hero.
09:34I had stuttered from age 3 to 16, my parents had told me to listen to his
09:38speeches, that he was far worse than I, but look what he can do now. And I knew
09:43that as king, he was listened to syllable by syllable, often critically, and yet
09:48he had enough guts to do it.
09:50So I thought there was hope for me.
09:52So I always wanted to write something about George.
09:54I had no idea what the story was.
09:57That's all I knew was George.
09:59So I started reading, and there were these blips on the radar screen called
10:03Lionel Logue, his speech therapist.
10:05Not much is written about him, even in the biographies.
10:09The royal stutterer is an embarrassment.
10:12You must understand that stuttering was called, until very recently, a
10:16speech defect.
10:18So if you had a speech defect, you were a, ipso facto, a defective person.
10:24You couldn't have the King of England being called a defective person, so you
10:28don't talk about the stutter.
10:30But I could smell a story with Lionel Logue.
10:33I don't know if there are any reporters here, but you just sort of get a
10:37whiff of something.
10:39So I asked a friend in London to do a bit of research--
10:42I think it was looking in the telephone directory--and she found a surviving
10:47son, Valentine Logue.
10:49In the film, he is the young chap with his nose always buried in the textbooks.
10:53And he had become an eminent brain surgeon in Harley Street,
10:57I am sure much to his father's delight because Lionel always felt so
11:02denigrated by the rather snobby British medical community.
11:07I wrote to him, and he wrote back and said, "Yes, come to London if you wish.
11:11I will speak with you, and I have all the notebooks my father kept while
11:16treating the King."
11:18I thought it's the motherlode. Eureka! But he had a small caveat to his letter.
11:25He said, "I will do this, but first, you must get written permission from the
11:29Queen Mother," and that's when my American friends realized, yes, I really am
11:35still a Brit at heart.
11:36I am an American and proud of it, but I am a Brit by birth.
11:40So I wrote to the Queen Mum, and I got a lovely crisp cream-colored stationary
11:46envelope with a big red stamp of Clarence House.
11:49And she said, "Dear Mr.Seidler, please, not during my lifetime;
11:54the memory of these events are still too painful."
11:57Well, I thought, all right, if a Brit asks the Queen Mum's permission and she
12:03says, wait, you wait, or you go to the Tower of London.
12:08But I didn't think I had to wait for very long.
12:10She was an elderly lady.
12:12I thought, a year.
12:1325 years later, at the age of 100, almost 102, she finally left this
12:24mortal realm.
12:26So that's why it took a little while to get started.
12:29(laughter and applause)
12:38Anne: So Charlie, you were working with a partner on Get Low.
12:43This is based on a true figure, but how true? How real is this man that Robert
12:49Duvall was playing in Get Low?
12:50Anne: Is he a phantom or--? Yeah. Charlie: Well, there really was a Felix Bush,
12:53Charlie: but all we really knew about him is
12:57that he had this funeral, he invited everybody to come, and that's really all we had.
13:04There was some mystery about him, but he never revealed what it was.
13:09Supposedly somewhere back in his youth, he had done something really bad, which
13:16had caused him to withdraw completely from the world, but what that was, we
13:21never knew. So we had to invent that.
13:23Anne: So you were working away in the Indie world on what was a modest script.
13:30I mean did you have any idea that you would end up landing the cast that you did,
13:34and that it would get the kind of attention that it got?
13:39Charlie: Interesting question!
13:42I went to Mr. Duvall's house in Virginia, went out on the back porch, and we were sitting out
13:51there and talking about the character and talking about the story.
13:59Sometime during those two days we spent on the back porch, something happened.
14:06We both decided that this was the story we had to tell.
14:10I think we would have done anything to make it happen.
14:15I know I would have, and he certainly stepped up and proved that, too.
14:18Anne: He sure did.
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The writer's journey (cont.)
00:00Anne Thompson: Lisa, you ended up taking a long time to write The Kids Are All Right as
00:04well, some five years, and you got Julianne Moore attached very, very early on.
00:11Can you talk about how the original idea of the script changed over those five
00:16years, and whether the period of time that it took to actually deliver the movie
00:21made it a better movie in the end?
00:23Lisa Cholodenko: I'm so glad you didn't ask me how the original, original idea came about.
00:31I feel like everybody in this room probably has heard that story.
00:35I started writing it on my own, based on experiences that I was going through
00:42in my own life with trying to start a family.
00:44I ran into my co-writer, Stuart Blumberg, who I wish was here, but he is on
00:48the East Coast.
00:51We had a great chance encounter in a restaurant near my house called the
00:55101 Cafe where I would sit everyday and kill time and eat French toast.
01:00He walked in one day.
01:01I hadn't seen him in quite some time.
01:03I'd moved to LA about a year or two earlier from New York, and he was still in
01:08New York, and he walked in, and it was just one of those old acquaintances that
01:12you know and admire but you don't have any real history with.
01:17And he sat down, and we started talking about what we're doing in our careers and
01:23next steps and this and that.
01:26I told him about this script that I had just begun, but here I was stalling and
01:31eating French toast and I guess I was hitting a wall early on.
01:34And I told him that it was about this family and these teenage kids, and one of
01:40them was coming of age on her own and kind of in sort of secrecy was
01:46digging around to find her sperm-donor father.
01:49Stuart just sort of spontaneously said, oh wow!
01:51I was a sperm donor in college.
01:54And it was like one of those revelation moments, because I'd been thinking
01:58conceptually about sperm donors for a long time and never had met a real, live,
02:03animated, human male sperm donor, and there he was, right in my face.
02:08I actually knew him and liked him and he is handsome and bright and the rest of it.
02:16And based on that and based on kind of things that we were saying to each other
02:20in this conversation, one being, unsolicited, he said to me, "You know, I think you
02:26come up with these great character studies and stories and stuff, but I would
02:30love to see you push out a little bit and kind of take your stuff in a
02:34commercial vein," which I, of course, took offense to.
02:37Lisa: And then I said to him-- Anne: Her first film was called High Art.
02:42Lisa: Right--and a cult classic for those that live in Downtown New York.
02:48I said to him, "I think you've got great comedic chops, and I think that you do
02:55structure great, and here you are writing and rewriting studio films, but I
03:00really think it's time for you to start diggin deeper."
03:02So based on the sperm donor and what I was going through and this and that
03:09and trying to start a family and him needed to dig deeper and me needing to push wider,
03:15I just spontaneously said, "Oh wow!
03:18This could be an antidote to all this loneliness of screenwriting.
03:22Hey Stu, do you want to write this movie with me?"
03:24And I guess he was in this same state of mind, and he sort of signed up right
03:30there in the coffee shop.
03:33So part of the reason why it took so long to write it was that he primarily was
03:39still living on the East Coast.
03:40So I was on the West Coast, and we would have to make these appointments.
03:45I didn't want to skype it in, and I didn't-- you know, the point to me of writing
03:49with another writer was the synergy, all the ineffable stuff that you get by
03:54sitting next to another human being and what comes out of that, just you know
03:58sort of energetically, beyond the words.
04:01So I wanted to wait till when we could spend time together.
04:04So months would go by between these 2- to 3-week periods where we would plot out
04:10time to sit and try to push through a draft.
04:14So I am going to try to cut to the chase here, which is we got through a
04:18first draft. It was long.
04:21It involved a river rafting trip. It was very expensive.
04:26We liked it, but nobody wanted to make it, and we had to go back to the
04:30drawing board.
04:32The next detour was I had a child.
04:35I had to take some time out to do that project.
04:42In terms of Anne's question, that was a great time out, because it really
04:46fortified my commitment to the subject and to the kind of machinations of what
04:54this couple was going through.
04:56It was my girlfriend and I, and we'd had this child with an anonymous sperm donor.
05:01So here I was finally living my part of the arrangement.
05:05He'd already been a sperm donor, but I had to kind of fulfill my end of it.
05:11So you go on and on and you keep writing drafts and you keep trying to make them
05:16tight, and meanwhile, you're waiting for your partner to come to the next coast,
05:21or be able to travel, and things marinate and start the truth and the falsity of
05:27what you've written, the authenticity, the level of understanding of your
05:31characters, and of your plot,
05:33I think that's something that really time is the thing that brings that in to focus.
05:39So while I was wringing my hands it was taking so much time, in the end, in
05:44retrospect that was kind of the biggest, biggest gift of it all that we had all
05:48that time to reflect on each draft.
05:50Anne: Yes, I am very aware that what I do as a blogger is very different from what
05:54you all do as to taking a very long time to hone and polish.
05:58And Michael, you're yet another example of this, after you did Little Miss
06:04Sunshine and won the Oscar for your first produced screenplay.
06:08(clapping)
06:10Lisa: No big deal. Anne: For which he was on this panel once before.
06:14You then went up to Pixar, you went north and joined this sort of hive mind, and
06:20yet you still have a single screenplay credit for Toy Story 3.
06:24So what was the biggest-- you had these beloved characters that
06:31everybody really loved.
06:32You were writing a sequel, and you had to take this sort of pitch that they gave
06:38you and turn it into something real.
06:40What would be the biggest difference between what that initial hive-mind
06:45creation was and what you ended up with at the end?
06:48Michael Arndt: Just to sort of correct the chronology, I actually was first contacted by
06:55Pixar in the summer of 2005 when Little Miss Sunshine was still being shot.
06:59So they called me up when I was an un-produced screenwriter.
07:04I first went up and interviewed and got hired by them in September of 2005.
07:10So that was before we'd even been accepted at Sundance.
07:14So I just felt very lucky to be there.
07:16It wasn't as though I won-- Little Miss Sunshine came out and then I
07:20joined Pixar.
07:21It was, I joined Pixar and then Little Miss Sunshine came out.
07:24I was just happy to be there.
07:26I mean I was so happy.
07:27I mean I sort of spent ten years sitting alone in my apartment in Brooklyn
07:31writing, and so to be invited to come up aboard this incredible company and
07:37just work collaboratively with other writers,
07:40I just thought, "I have to do this."
07:42And just to answer your question very briefly, they went away and they came
07:46back--the guys who had written the original Toy Story movies went away for two
07:50days and they had sort of a retreat.
07:52And they came up with sort of the real strong foundation of the movie, which
07:56was at the beginning.
07:57I think that the smartest decision they made was the first decision, which was
08:01that they were going to let screen time elapse in real time, so that it would've
08:04been 11 years since the last movie, and basically, 11 years would have gone by,
08:07so that Andy is grown up and the toys are now facing a real problem.
08:11John Lasseter said that if you're a toy and you get broken, you can get fixed,
08:15and if you get lost, you can be found. But if your a kid that grows up, there is no
08:17sort of solution to that.
08:19And it's a great, great thing, because I think as a storyteller, you're always
08:23looking for a problem to give to your character that the audience doesn't see a
08:27clear, easy solution to.
08:29And then they came back and they gave me--the middle was that they donate
08:32themselves to daycare, and then initially it looks great and then it turns
08:36out it's not so great.
08:37And then the end was--and this was also a really, really crucial--was to make
08:44this decision that the end of the story Andy was going to give all his toys away,
08:48sort of one by one, to this little girl named Bonnie.
08:51And that I just felt like I was so, so lucky at the beginning of the process, and
08:55we were all so lucky to have those three building blocks, and especially the ending,
09:00especially something that you always had a flagged point on the horizon, you
09:03always knew that you were going there.
09:07However the detours we took, we always knew exactly where we were going.
09:11Just in a nutshell, like for example, the third act of the film, now, in the film
09:16they go to the landfill.
09:18That wasn't in the original conception;
09:20it was a scramble to get home in the third act, which we ended up throwing away.
09:23The hardest thing there was just figuring out what the arc of your hero's story
09:29is. I mean, Woody is essentially the hero of the movie. What does he learn
09:33in the course of the story?
09:34And it's really tricky if you're doing a third film of a character who is
09:38already sort of as well-defined as sort Buzz or Woody.
09:41In the first film, Woody has to realize that he is sort of an only child or he
09:46is a favorite, he is Andy's favorite, and then he has to realize that he has to
09:49share the spotlight.
09:50And developmentally, that tracks with someone, a kid who is five or
09:54six years old.
09:55And then in the second film, he actually has to come in terms with his mortality;
09:59he has to realize, someday I'm going to get worn out.
10:01I'm going to get thrown away.
10:03And that developmentally tracks with the kid who is eight or nine years old.
10:07So it was really hard thinking, okay, what new lesson can this character learn in
10:11the course of the third story, because it has to feel like a real story.
10:13It has to feel like you've really solved something, or he's really gotten a new
10:17perspective on life.
10:19And that, it took a long, long, long time and a lot of like conversations around
10:23in the story room to figure out he has always said--
10:27It's funny. I always feel like--probably same with you guys;
10:30your answer is already almost always already there in a story.
10:34So in the original movies, Woody keeps insisting our job is to be there for
10:38Andy, our job is to be there for Andy, and he is equating love with always
10:41being there.
10:43So to make a long story short, we got to the end and Woody has to overhear his
10:47mom saying to Andy, "I wish I could always be there with you," and Andy
10:51saying, "You will be, Mom."
10:52And that way, you shift from sort of a literal sense of always being there for
10:57somebody to a figurative sense.
11:01Woody finally learns that he can love somebody and let them go.
11:04He learns about the impermanence of things. He learns about moving on.
11:07But it took a long, long, long time and a lot of meetings to really figure out.
11:11The nice thing is that it developmentally tracks with someone who is older, who
11:15is essentially a teenager.
11:16So that now if you look at the arc of all three stories, it really feels like
11:19Woody has gone from being a very immature, sort of five-year-old, to being
11:23sort of a grownup.
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Research and inspiration
00:00Anne Thompson: Aaron, your movie has obviously taken off in all sorts of crazy ways since
00:06you wrote it, in terms of the debate, the media, discussion of it, and the Mark
00:11Zuckerberg of it all.
00:13The idea that you were taking some license with him has always been something of
00:18an issue, and it almost feels, on the one hand, some people read this movie that
00:25he is a hero, some people hate him.
00:27I mean there is Rorschach test of how people react to him, and you've also had to
00:31deal with his own reaction and the kind of media counter-fight that he waged.
00:37But in some ways your movie is responsible for him being on the cover of Time.
00:41Could you articulate for me a little bit how you have responded to this
00:47extraordinary arc that has emerged since you wrote this script, presumably you
00:52know thinking about what might happen and not sure how it would play out?
00:55Aaron Sorkin: Sure. I'll do my best.
01:00First of all, I think that the movie is fictionalized less than you'd
01:09probably think.
01:15When you're writing nonfiction, particularly nonfiction about people who are
01:18still alive, and in this case they are young people,
01:22you have your own moral compass that says, "First, do no harm."
01:26You're not going to play it fast and loose with the lives of real people. And if
01:31your own moral compass is broken, there is the Sony Legal Department to help you out.
01:36(laughter)
01:41You're simply not allowed to say something that is untrue and defamatory at
01:46the same time. And if I had, you would know it, because Mark Zuckerberg would
01:50own Sony right now. (laughter)
01:56The Social Network doesn't fall very easily into any particular genre, but for
02:01me, the one that it comes closest to is a courtroom drama. And after doing all the
02:07research, and that research included available research, like the kind of thing
02:12you could, anything you could find on the Internet; for instance--and very
02:16importantly--Mark's own blog post from that Tuesday night in October 2003 that
02:23we hear in voiceover at the beginning of the movie when Mark in a revenge stunt
02:28against a woman whose name I changed.
02:30The character was real; the name is different.
02:33There were three names I changed in that thing.
02:36It's a revenge done first against this one woman and then against the entire
02:40female population of Harvard.
02:43Facemash, which goes viral in one night and crashes the Harvard computer system,
02:47you can find that yourself.
02:48I then had cartons and cartons of legal documents that I was walked through by two
02:52lawyers--an intellectual property lawyer and a corporate lawyer--and finally,
02:56the first-person research, speaking to the people who were right there at the
03:03events that were taking place. And just the one last point that I'll make about
03:08fictionalizing it, before I answer the real substance of your question, is this.
03:14In that blog post that we hear at the beginning of the movie, Mark tells us
03:18that he's drunk.
03:19Okay? He says I won't lie to you. I'm pretty inebriated right now.
03:23So what if it's Tuesday night, and it's only 09:30.
03:25We hear Jesse saying that in voiceover as he's typing it; it is there in
03:30the blog post.
03:31What I had written in the script was that Mark walks into his dorm room,
03:35walks past his laptop, turns it on, walks out of the frame, comes back in,
03:39puts a glass down.
03:40We see ice go into the glass, vodka go into the glass, orange juice get poured
03:44over the glass, and he begins drinking.
03:46But a few weeks before photography began, we found out that it was beer that
03:51that he was drinking that night, specifically Beck's.
03:54And so David Fincher said, "All right, Aaron. We have got to change it to a beer.
03:59Let's have him go over to his mini fridge and get a beer out." And I pleaded with
04:03him, "David, come on. Drunk is drunk.
04:06It doesn't really matter how he got there.
04:09We're not changing the fundamental truth, and making a screwdriver is just
04:13visually more interesting than opening a bottle of beer, and it also reads
04:18immediately as 'I'm drinking to get drunk,' rather than 'I am drinking because I
04:21am college student, or on I'm thirsty.'"
04:24But he said, "No, when we know a fact, that is the fact that we're going to
04:29use." And I just have to say that it should tell you something about how close
04:37our research sources were to the event that we know what brand of beer he was
04:41drinking on a Tuesday night in October 2003 when there were only four other
04:45people in the room. (laughter)
04:51In terms of the takeaway, I'm delighted by the fact that it is, as you put it,
04:55Anne, a Rorschach test, that while the movie seems to be enjoyed by pretty
05:05much every demographic,
05:06it doesn't seem to have a demographical sweet spot, that the takeaways are
05:14remarkably different, that there are people who see it as a cautionary tale
05:20about technology replacing humanity, and that it doesn't matter how many friends
05:28you can count on your page.
05:30What matters is the depth of the friendship that you have with one person.
05:36And there are people who see Mark as a rock star, who kind of overthrew the
05:44establishment and built his own thing, and there are plenty of other takeaways as
05:50well, and none of them are invalid.
05:53I like that the movie doesn't take a position on who was right and who was
05:58wrong, who was lying, who is telling the truth, who's good, who's bad, or
06:03what you're supposed to think the movie is about.
06:08So I feel very good about that.
06:09Anne: And yet in some of your acceptance speeches you seemed to be reaching out to Mr.
06:13Zuckerberg, as if you want to say, "thank you," or you are trying to ameliorate it a little bit.
06:18Aaron: I do, and that's because, you know what, he, in the week that the movie
06:24opened, we opened in the U.S. on October 1st, and just a few days before we opened,
06:31he donated $100 billion to the Newark Public School System. That gift was met
06:36with some skepticism and cynicism in the press because it was felt that it was
06:40done to deflect the negative criticism that would surely be coming his way when
06:45the movie opened. And I felt like neither the kids in Newark, nor their
06:50parents, nor their teachers, gave a damn how the money got there, that it was an
06:56extraordinary gift, and I was trying to tell him that on television.
07:04You know, one of the reasons I really got jazzed about writing the movie was
07:08because when I would--the first thing I did was just see a couple of tapes of him.
07:17Lesley Stahl had done an interview with him two years ago.
07:20She also did one very recently. But she did one with him two years ago, around
07:25the time that I first started working on the movie, and there was some more
07:31footage of him at a conference of some kind in Silicon Valley.
07:36I watched this footage with a couple of friends of mine and a couple of people I
07:41work with who were women, and they had a very negative reaction to Mark.
07:47They recoiled. They thought, "Ugh" He's--they didn't like him, and I did.
07:55I saw what they were seeing, but I also saw a kid who is socially awkward, and I
08:06was able to identify with that, a kid who's in way over his head, and I'm able to
08:12identify with that, too.
08:14He was 26 years old at the time of his Lesley Stahl interview, running a
08:19company the size of General Motors or CBS, and being interviewed on 60
08:23Minutes, and I didn't believe that I would have been able to handle that as
08:27well as he had.
08:29So, honest to God, what you're referring to, the couple of acceptance speeches
08:35I've been delighted to be able to give, when I've reached out to Mark, I've
08:40really been talking to that kid who got shoved into his locker his whole life,
08:47Aaron: saying, "You did all right." Anne: Thank you.
08:50(applause)
08:55Anne: So Scott and David, both of you are dealing, as Aaron has been, with real, live
09:02people who you want to do, do right by.
09:06Talk a little bit about the ways that you have had to jump away from reality to
09:12form the narrative and dramas of The King's Speech and The Fighter.
09:17Scott Silver: You know, we had to change a lot and condense a lot.
09:20I think it's a different level with sort of Micky and Dicky that are this--
09:24Anne: Do speak into the microphone, yeah.
09:25Scott: Like that. I think it's a different level for Micky and Dicky.
09:29I think we wanted to stay as close as we could to the truth of who they were as
09:32people, and try to be authentic as we can to the characters, but we had to
09:36change a lot for the time period.
09:37In real life, Dicky went to prison for eight years. Micky had three
09:41different comebacks, which makes it a far less interesting story.
09:45So we changed obviously enough to make it into a movie, and it's not
09:48a documentary.
09:49As far as the reaction, I think it was harder for Dicky,
09:52I mean to see himself up there smoking crack, and Christian is sort of
09:56convincing. I mean it was really difficult for him to watch the movie.
09:59Micky, I couldn't ever imagine someone making him--not that anybody would want
10:03to, but make a movie about my life.
10:04I mean it's such a--I just couldn't imagine someone up there playing me,
10:08going through some experience that I had had.
10:10So I think how someone reacts is obviously personal. The weird thing for Micky
10:13is that one part he hated is that in real life he never got knocked down in the
10:18fight against Shea Neary.
10:19And he hated Shea Neary.
10:20Micky is the sweetest, nicest guy, but he hated Shea Neary.
10:23He was really rude to him.
10:25And so Micky was really upset that it showed him being knocked down.
10:28He was like, "I never got *!@#$ knocked down." That really--it took him to get over.
10:32That was the only thing that bugged him.
10:34It was like that sort of drove him crazy, but we took the movie to Lowell, and I
10:40was most concerned with Alice, because these are real people.
10:43I mean it's easy for us to sort of, especially in our case, they are
10:46Steve: alive, but you know-- Anne: And they're on your set, right?
10:49Scott: Yeah. There are a lot of them, and obviously it was shot in Lowell. But these are still
10:58real people who have kids and ex- husbands and husbands and boyfriends, and they
11:03go to school, and you know it's sort of--I don't think anybody sees themselves
11:07in the way that sort of the movie portrays them.
11:09It's sort of--that's who they are as people.
11:13So I was sort of, especially for Alice, who is really frail, she is 80 now,
11:17she is actually in the hospital. But she hadn't been out of her house
11:20literally for like months.
11:21When she was younger, she was, no joke,
11:24I mean she was tough, but now she is really frail, and I thought the movie
11:29would kill her.
11:30I mean, it was sort of like, I was terrified, because there is some stuff in
11:33there that I knew that was true but that would embarrass her about the number
11:37of husbands--well, husbands?--the number of different fathers of her kids. There
11:40were only two husbands.
11:42So there are some stuff that you go, "I don't know," and so she watched the movie
11:45with one of the producers, Dorothy Aufiero, and I was terrified.
11:48And David, to his credit, sort of stood there, because if anybody, they were going
11:51to point at him, not at me for that.
11:54So he stood there, and Alice started watching it, and she's like literally like 80 pounds.
12:00I mean she is tiny and thin, and she sat there watching it, and the one thing
12:04in real life that I also think is in the movie, Alice loved to get dressed
12:07up for events.
12:08One of the things for her that was great when Dicky started boxing, she would
12:11always go get her hair done. She would always get an outfit for it.
12:14I mean that was sort of part of the experience.
12:16So of course, Alice had already gone and got an outfit and she had her hair
12:20teased up, she was frail, frail, frail, and thin, thin, thin. And she started
12:24watching the movie, and she had a bag of popcorn, and her hand just froze for the
12:28first ten minutes of the movie and it didn't move.
12:30I literally thought it was going to kill her.
12:31It was like, she just stood there. And the first scenes are the toughest,
12:35because Melissa Leo, who did a great job, comes in and shows a scrapbook.
12:40Then there is the scene in the bar where you find out that there is a bunch of
12:43different fathers, and there are nine kids, and it's like they are givin' her a
12:46hard time, but it's the truth. And I was just like, ah!
12:50And she froze, and then as the movie got started along, she started eating
12:55the popcorn. (laughter)
12:57And once she started eating the popcorn, I was like, "Phew, we are okay."
13:03We're going to make it through, she is going to be okay. And I walked with her
13:07out afterwards, and she said, "It wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be."
13:11And she was okay. Then during the screening, two of the sisters, Red Dog and
13:17Beaver--no, it was Red Dog.
13:18I am going to get this wrong.
13:20I think it was Red Dog and Beaver walked out. They were not happy.
13:24They screamed at David, but one of them came back.
13:27So given how what the reaction could have been,
13:32I think that was an overwhelming success for the-- I literally thought that
13:37someone would get killed in the screening.
13:41So that was sort of--they're doin' okay.
13:49Anne: David. David Arndt: Well, I have not had the
13:51pleasure of seeing the Queen eat popcorn,
13:56nor is she liable to make the commercial saying, "If you are only going to see
13:59one Royal film this year, see The King's Speech." We do know it has shown
14:07at Buckingham Palace to the household--that is to say the private
14:11secretaries, the equerries, the courtiers, and they loved it. And I was not
14:15there, but I was told that Prince Charles' private secretary at the end of the
14:20screening said, "Bloody good show." (laughter)
14:24When you are writing about a recently reigning monarch of England, you've got to
14:30be a little careful.
14:32So obviously, I felt there was a great burden upon me to be as historically
14:39accurate as humanly possible.
14:41Sure, liberties have to be taken;
14:44we are making a film, not a documentary.
14:47The greatest liberty I took was, similar to yours, the compression of time.
14:54The relationship between Logue and Bertie was over a very extended period, which
14:59makes for kind of a flabby movie.
15:01I've noticed, doing a lot of biopics, that people don't have the grace to live
15:06their life in a good three-act scenario. (laughter)
15:09They are very messy.
15:12But I tried to--you would be surprised how many lines in the film are
15:18actually direct quotes, a great deal of them.
15:22We get sometimes criticized for things that seem too good to be true.
15:28Some critics have said, "Well, it's absolutely nonsense that the Queen was sitting
15:33on the King's stomach during his breathing exercises."
15:36I've got to tell you folks, that's exactly what she did.
15:41The scene where right at the eve of the coronation, Cosmo Lang, the Archbishop
15:46of Canterbury discovers that Logue is not a doctor, has no credentials, had no
15:52formal training, and wants to replace him, and Bertie stands up to him.
15:56That really did take place.
15:59It was probably--it was not the last night before the coronation, but it was
16:03during the rehearsal period.
16:05It did take place.
16:08The techniques, I mean the greatest, the biggest challenge I faced was, of course,
16:16the gut of the film:
16:17it's two men in a room and nobody else was in the room with them, and they're
16:22both gone, so I can't interview them.
16:24So it had to be educated surmise, but it wasn't a terribly difficult
16:30problem really.
16:32Although I could never prove that Lionel Logue read Sigmund Freud, I knew
16:37intuitively he to be using the talking cure, and surprisingly I got to
16:42prove that in an extraordinary way.
16:46I have a very elderly and eccentric uncle in England, also named David, also a former
16:51stutterer. And in the early stages of this project when I was trying to do it on
16:55my own nickel, he would let me use his flat in St. John Wood as a pied-a-terre,
17:01and he became familiar with the project. He asked
17:03to read the screenplay, which I gave him. And one day he said to me, "You know,
17:08that fellow in your project, Logue, isn't his name?"
17:11I said, "Yes, uncle. You've read the screenplay. His name is Logue."
17:15"Australian, wasn't he?"
17:16I said, "Yes, he is Australian." "Mm! Yes, I saw him for years as a lad."
17:21I said, "What!?"
17:25He said, "Yes, your grandfather, my father, wanted me to be treated by the King's
17:30speech therapist, so I went."
17:31I said, "What? Uncle, why didn't you tell me?
17:36What went on? What were the consultations like?
17:39What was the treatment like?"
17:40He said, "Well, I didn't mention it because it was rubbish. Absolute nonsense.
17:46The man didn't know anything.
17:50He was an Australian gangster, just taking money.
17:53All he wanted to do was talk about his childhood and his parents, and get me to
17:58talk about my childhood and my parents."
18:02I said, "Yes, but David, you don't stutter anymore."
18:06He said, "Yes, but I would have outgrown it wouldn't I?"
18:10So if you know that one of the people in the room is using the talking cure,
18:17and if you've read everything conceivably written about the patient--which I
18:22had done, obviously--
18:24it's pretty easy to figure out what they're going to be talking about.
18:28So I feel confident that, can I say that those were the exact words they used?
18:34Absolutely not.
18:35But is that probably what we they were talking about?
18:37Yeah, I think it's a pretty good guess.
18:40So that was how I was dealing with that.
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Plot and character development
00:00Anne Thompson: Charlie, you were basically making up the real story behind that myth, your
00:04version of what really happened there, his motivations for throwing that party.
00:10Charlie Mitchell: Well, it's sort of the basic writer's tenant, right?
00:13You're coming from mystery, complete mystery in this case of what actually
00:17happened. But something happened. Something made this man of promise, everybody
00:24said that he was very bright, had a brilliant future ahead of him, and he
00:30withdrew completely from the world.
00:33And of course, the stories grew around him of why and how and "who is
00:38he really," after a while. Nobody--the connections with people who knew him as a young man
00:45started to go away. Everybody moved off, or
00:48they died, and pretty soon there was very few people around who remembered
00:51what he was.
00:53And so, the whole idea was that we're going to start with this mystery and
01:00where are we going to go?
01:02What would make this happen?
01:05And that's sort of where we began the whole journey.
01:09Then when I was talking about being on Bobby's back porch in Virginia, that's
01:13where we started, and that's where the conversation started, and that's where
01:17we journeyed into.
01:19Anne: So your star was very integral in the actual writing of the screenplay?
01:24Charlie: Bobby is--and I call him Bobby by the way, because he told me to.
01:33Mr. Duval tells you to call him Bobby, you call him Bobby. But if--Bobby was
01:41really concerned about, how do we get inside this person, because that's where he
01:48is going to come from.
01:49I am sure you've watched his career over the years. He is amazing at that.
01:57He goes deep. He starts, let's clear everything away, and let's start here.
02:03And so he took me to that place.
02:08That was basically what he was telling me on the porch was, look, we have to get
02:13down to who this guy really is, because that's the only way I can do this.
02:17I feel like there is something here.
02:21That's why I was there, because I felt all my senses were telling me, there
02:24is something here.
02:25This mystery is something you need to go into, and he felt the same thing, the
02:31director felt the same thing, and we all went into it together, and what you see
02:36on screen is what we found there.
02:38Anne: Excellent!
02:41Lisa, Annette Bening last night at her tribute said something very
02:45interesting about the difference between words and visual, that screenwriting
02:53is one thing, dense dialog is one thing, but then as an actor, a lot of the
02:57time you want silence.
03:00And I wondered if you could talk a little bit about that process in The Kids
03:03Are All Right, of simplifying and making it work?
03:06Lisa: Yeah, it's an interesting process.
03:12I think I am the only person on this
03:14Anne: Who is a director, in this case. Lisa: panel--well, who directed what they wrote.
03:17Lisa: So it's interesting to write for yourself and think one step ahead to that, and
03:24then get into as well, with an actor and go through yet another phase of looking
03:28at the screenplay. Annette Bening was an extraordinary person to work with
03:32because she really loves the text.
03:35She really loves to get in there and talk about what's going on and how to
03:40modify maybe the script before we get in and shoot.
03:43So there was stuff that we've looked at, that we, as she spoke about last
03:48night, kept paring back at dialogue and text to really get to the essence of
03:53what was happening in the moments in the scenes.
03:58But again, back to the original question, one of the great things about
04:02spending so much time and letting all this material marinate and really asking
04:05hard questions of it over the years was that we could distill it down to what
04:11the essence of it was. And while I knew that we had to be concerned with plot,
04:16and how do we make five main characters have quick but complete arcs and
04:24intersect in a way that isn't episodic but is integrated into one complete
04:28whole, and then in that way become a bigger idea than itself, than the
04:33constituent parts, and have a theme and whatnot,
04:36I mean these things become like kind of bad math problems.
04:40They are very difficult, and so at a certain point you hope that you kind of
04:46crack that to transcend that and get to something that's richer, that is
04:51thematic and transcendent, and I'm sure that's what we all kind of like are just
04:57praying for it at out altars of whatever we do.
05:02So that was the process, and then finally you're digging deeper and you're
05:07pushing away all the stuff that's superfluous and not necessary, and you're kind
05:12of cracking each the character and the arc and how it intersects and the
05:17causality of each person's issue and dilemma and plot and whatnot.
05:23Then you get into that stuff, and all of a sudden you are kind of liberated,
05:27because you realize, I don't need to say this.
05:29The story is saying it already, and indeed less is more, and the audience is
05:39going to get it, and they're going to really appreciate not being told it, but being
05:44shown it through the actor,
05:47and in that way, I think, have a more visceral and identified experience of it.
05:53So for me as a writer-director that's like the real joy of working a script to
05:57that core and then handing it over to these consummate actors and letting them
06:04transform it to this higher level.
06:10It's hard *&@#$ work, but once you get there and the pleasures are few and far
06:14between, but the pleasures are big, and I guess we're all kind of addicted
06:17to those pleasures.
06:18Because when they come, they are transcendent.
06:20They are beautiful moments.
06:22Anne: Well, Tarantino talks about the whole process of making a movie, that the
06:27editing is part of the writing as well. And you showed the movie at Sundance, and
06:32I enjoyed it and got a big kick out of it.
06:34And then I saw it again at the Los Angeles Film Festival, and it was funnier.
06:39What did you do?
06:40Lisa: Yeah, that was a big misery. Without going into the back story of how this
06:48film actually got made,
06:50I was given a "You are now a serf.
06:54You have no voice. Get this thing to Sundance.
06:57This is where we have to sell it." by a person who is not even in this country.
07:02So I spent the holidays of that year cutting away, and I said, "I am not going to
07:10be able to finish it, but I will get it into shape that you can show it and
07:13buyer beware, and I'll do my best."
07:16We had a temp score and we just cut to-- the last minute when I had to send
07:22it off and get it digitally reproduced to show it. And it was mortifying for
07:28me, because of course you want to put a big fat disclaimer on your movie and
07:31say, "This is not finished! Don't hold me accountable!" And as anybody knows, and
07:39writers know from drafts and working closely with directors and being
07:42involved, I am sure everybody here was really intimate with the whole project
07:45till the end,
07:47in the cutting room every little beat and every little rhythm and everything
07:51that you know, whether it's--they talk about, "Oh, you need to lose two minutes."
07:55Two minutes could be huge.
07:57It can make you dig the film or feel like what, something was weird with
08:01that film.
08:02I mean it's a very odd thing.
08:05And so, I felt like we didn't do our last pass.
08:07We did not finish the final part of this film where that rhythm is dead on and
08:12everything is working right.
08:14Anne: The good news is that you did sell it, and you were able to take the time to
08:19finesse it, and it seems to have been a happy ending.
08:21Lisa: It was a happy ending, and that night was a happy ending, but I have to say
08:25it was surreal.
08:26I had one of those Annette Bening experiences where everything sort of stopped
08:30and I am watching this movie with a Sundance crowd for the first time and
08:33everything is riding on this "sale," or if the film is working, and people are
08:37laughing, and I had this horrified feeling like that the joke was on me
08:41somehow and...weird.
08:45Anne: David, you apparently you showed The King's Speech at Toronto in one of
08:50those huge halls, and there was an extraordinary reaction. What was that like for you?
08:55David Arndt: Yeah, that was--well, I disgraced myself.
09:01What had happened was we had shown it at Telluride, and it had been an
09:06extraordinary reaction, but these are very small venues.
09:10So yeah, it was great. Certainly immediately got a sense that we had the wind
09:16to our back.
09:17But in Toronto for the first time, this huge auditorium, 2,000 seats,
09:23I was up in the first row of the balcony with Tom Hooper and Colin and
09:27Jeffrey and Helena and everyone. It's great, but it's in the dark, you see.
09:31And at the end, I realized something extraordinary is happening.
09:35First of all, before the end of the movie, at the end of the King's speech, the
09:40audience started applauding, and that was quite amazing.
09:44And then film ended, and 2,000 people just stood up, and I was quite overwhelmed,
09:52because--I'll probably disgrace myself again just remembering it.
09:58I was so overwhelmed with the fact that I realized for the first time in my life
10:04as a stutterer, my voice had truly been heard,
10:08and it was a great emotional experience.
10:11So there I am blubbering with a lot of mucus and tears coming down, and they show
10:16the spotlights on us. (laughter)
10:20Anne: They knew what they were doing. (applause)
10:25All right, from the sublime to the ridiculous, Michael, how did you come up
10:30with Spanish Buzz?
10:35Michael: Spanish Buzz was, it's a great example of why I just feel like the
10:41collaborative processes at Pixar are so great and so wonderful.
10:44I'll just--I am going to try and make it a short answer, but I think I wrote
10:49the first draft of Toy Story 3 and then wrote maybe a second draft, and then it
10:54was decided that all the people who had worked on the other Toy Story films,
10:58we are going to take another two-day retreat, and everybody was going to go
11:01for two days. And this is me as a writer.
11:03I have 20-25 other people sitting around in an inn in Napa Valley for two days
11:09helping me make my script better, which is unbelievable.
11:12I don't think. It's like nirvana.
11:16It's really like writer-nirvana.
11:18Anne: Not fair. Lisa: That's not fair. Damn!
11:22Michael: Well, and the amazing thing is that these are--they are not studio executives
11:25or development executives; these are other writer and directors.
11:29These are Brad Bird, it's Andrew Stanton, it's John Lasseter, it's Pete Doctor,
11:32and they are all sitting around, because they all worked on the--with the
11:36exception of Brad--worked on the initial Toy Story films.
11:38So they are trying to make it great. And it's just, until you get up to
11:42Pixar and see and how labor- intensive it is and how many people contribute,
11:46it's hard to even grasp. But to answer your question, I remember Andrew had
11:51written the--Andrew Stanton had written the treatment, and it was that Lotso
11:55switched Buzz into Delusional mode, and Buzz became a prison guard. And that was a
11:59good sort of obstacle, because you want your closest ally, or your most capable
12:04person, to suddenly become an antagonist, or to become an obstacle. But we're sitting
12:08there in the middle of like the second day, and I remember John Lasseter saying,
12:11you know, we've already seen Deluded Buzz.
12:13We've already seen him switch back to Deluded mode.
12:16I just wished there was something else.
12:17And that's like the smartest, I mean that's the most important part of solving a
12:21problem, is just identifying it, and saying, "We've done this before.
12:25There needs to something else."
12:27So then everyone around the room--again, it's like 25 people--start throwing out
12:30suggestions: a fast-motion Buzz, a slow-motion Buzz, a vibrating Buzz, or
12:34whatever, and I remember I was sitting--Andrew was right next to me, and I
12:37said, "Spanish Buzz," to him.
12:39I just sort of whispered it to him and Andrew went, "Spanish Buzz!"
12:42And the whole room just erupted, and everyone started like--ideas and jokes were
12:47like flying around the room, and you just knew at that moment that that was
12:50going to go into the movie. And what's interesting though, is that it takes three
12:56people to come up with the idea.
12:57It takes John to say that there's something missing here that we need to
13:00fill in. It's me like having an idea which is sort of the least important part of the
13:05whole process and then somebody else saying, out of a hundred ideas, that's the
13:09idea that we're going to do.
13:10So that was how Spanish Buzz came about. (applause)
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The writing process
00:00Anne Thompson: So this is the question I always enjoy.
00:02I love to know how you write, literally, physically.
00:07Aaron, is it a legal pad like Tarantino in some isolated place. Is it a computer?
00:15I mean how do you construct a screenplay literally?
00:17Aaron Sorkin: It used to be when I moved to New York after college, I had a whole bunch of
00:24survival jobs, and one of them was bartending in Broadway theaters.
00:29So I wrote most of--my first play was A Few Good Men--and I wrote most of it
00:34on cocktail napkins during the first act of La Cage Aux Folles.
00:36Anne: How do you do it now?
00:41Aaron: I miss those days, which is why I told that story.
00:50There is a long while that doesn't look like writing.
00:55To a casual observer, it would look a lot like lying on my couch and
01:01watching ESPN. (laughter)
01:11I also drive around. I listen to music.
01:15The most important thing for me is getting started.
01:18The difference between being on page two and page nothing is life and death.
01:21So I am looking for a way to get started, and once I do do that, then I write
01:30at a computer, either--I have an office at Warner Brothers and I have an
01:34office at home, so I am in one of those two places. And I need to know what I am
01:44going to write before I write anything.
01:45I need to--I have got index cards on the board, and I try to write.
01:52Once I am loaded up, once I know what I am doing, I write with as much speed
01:56as I can. I feel like that speed and energy will translate itself onto the page.
02:02When it's coming in little dribs and drabs, I know to stop because I don't know what I am doing.
02:06So I don't stop, stop trying to find a way around in the dark. But, speaking of
02:11finding a way around in the dark, I don't know everything about what I am going
02:17to write when I am writing.
02:18It's a little like walking forward in the dark with a flashlight.
02:21You can only see as far ahead as the beam will go.
02:25When I know how it's going to end-- and in this case, once I'd come up with how
02:30it was starting, I knew how it was going to end--
02:34that's a big victory for me, and I feel good about it. But I think all you
02:41wanted to know was how I write, and I do it at my desk at a computer.
02:44(laughter and applause)
02:49Anne: Scott?
02:50Scott Silver: Yeah. I wished I had as good a story about the cocktail napkins.
02:54I write at my desk, at my computer.
02:57It's like a job.
02:58It's like going to the office.
02:59And I think having that discipline and setting a schedule is tough for a writer,
03:02because if not, everyone's like, "You are not doing anything."
03:03"You are sitting around" mostly watching ESPN, or they say, "Can you come help me
03:07move a couch," or something. I am like, "I am writing."
03:09So it's sort of, I try to--so I have set hours now that sort of over the years
03:16sort of I try to get at the desk at a certain time, and I think the same way for
03:20me. I think you even knowing where you are going--
03:23I don't know how I am going to get there always--
03:24but I think in the same way as sort of what Michael said,
03:26I think if you know where you are going and you have that sense, I mean that's
03:29sort of where you have to begin.
03:30But for me, I am sort of a very slow writer.
03:33So I sort of--and will procrastinate, so I think I just sort of get as much
03:36research, sort of do as much *&^$#% as I can, until it gets to a point where it
03:39just becomes ridiculous.
03:40It looks like you haven't started writing yet?
03:42You are kidding.
03:43So I think sort of getting all of that stuff and sort of like getting
03:49everything that you sort of need, that's sort of when I'll sort of start--
03:51start the process.
03:53Anne: David?
03:55David Seidler: I write in bed, at least the first couple of hours. I am very lucky.
03:59I have an apartment with a bit of an ocean view, and I have the bed facing it.
04:04So I get up, I make myself coffee, and I sit there with my laptop like King
04:09Canute ordering the waves in and out, and they obey me, and that gives me a
04:18sense of entitlement and power, you see.
04:22For me, the longest process on any project is the beginning, the research
04:29and doing a treatment.
04:31I worked for years with a partner. Now I don't, but I still keep the same
04:35technique of doing a very detailed treatment, so I know exactly where I
04:40am going.
04:43Early on, when I did Tucker and was working with Francis, we had a
04:47conversation once that has held me in good stead.
04:51He was explaining how the first thing that he did on any project was know a big scene
05:00at the end, the penultimate scene as it were, and everything was then aimed towards
05:05that, and that's been a really good, helpful hint, and I've always use that.
05:10So I make 3x5 cards. If I have a large home, which I don't anymore, with a
05:17corkboard, I put it all on there.
05:19Now, I put it on the living room carpet, and I can't open the windows for two
05:23weeks because if the wind blows, my structure is absolutely shot.
05:30In terms of the actual working day, as I say, I will start the first hour or so in
05:35bed, if I can get away with it, which I usually can.
05:37I am sure that eBay was invented for my benefit, too, so I could do
05:42something other than write.
05:45I will work from say 9:00 or 9:30 until about 2:30-3:00, when I hit that
05:51metabolic low that most people have. And when I find my forehead is resting on
05:56the Spacebar, I know that I have done it for the day.
05:59I will do some exercise, go for a 90- minute walk, go for a run. That may be
06:03the day. But if I am under pressure for a deadline or heading down the homestretch and
06:09have build up a real head of steam, I will then start again, maybe when the sun
06:14is just going down the yard, I work another whole stretch. I can do a double
06:19day that way. And that's the way I do it.
06:23Anne: Charlie?
06:24Charlie Mitchell: Yeah, a lot of things get done besides writing when you are writing.
06:30Lisa Cholodenko: But you are still writing. Charlie: Yeah, of course. Yeah, it's all right.
06:37I think for me, how I am writing depends on what's happening in the story.
06:44I can't sort of enforce some sort of pattern on that.
06:51I will tell you something that happened just the other day.
06:56My character was about to do something that was going to really impact her life
07:01in a big way, and I could see it coming, and I couldn't do it.
07:10I just could not do it.
07:12I couldn't sit down.
07:13I couldn't make myself sit down to do it.
07:15I just couldn't do it; I couldn't do it to her.
07:18She couldn't see it coming.
07:20You know what I am saying? She couldn't see it coming and I could, and I just got the glimpse before
07:24I got up from the desk of what was about to happen.
07:27I didn't know what was going to happen till that moment, and then I saw that,
07:29and I couldn't sit down for two days.
07:34And finally, I got my courage up to go back.
07:37So a lot of my process is determined by what's happening inside the story.
07:41Anne: How do you all deal with writer's block?
07:45I mean what are your techniques for getting around it?
07:48Michael Arndt: I will jump in.
07:50I think one of the reasons you get writer's block is because you are trying to
07:54find the perfect answer right off the bat; you are trying to hit the bull's eye
07:56right off the bat. And that you just stop dead in your tracks, and just what you
08:01can do is say, okay, there is like I am just going to make a list of ideas.
08:05I don't care if they are good, bad, or indifferent.
08:06I am just going to list everything.
08:08Here's an example, which was how to get out of the scene when the cop pulls them
08:13over in Little Miss Sunshine. It ended up being grandpa's magazines basically,
08:20But I didn't really have an ending of that scene, and you just go, okay, well
08:23what's there in the--what do they have at their disposal, or it's the claw
08:29rescuing them at the dump.
08:30You go, okay, well what's the-- their needs to be a life-or-death
08:33jeopardy situation.
08:34They need to get rescued at the last second.
08:36What do we have?
08:37And instead of trying to find the perfect answer, you just list everything
08:41that's at a dump, just every possible thing you can think of, and then you try.
08:44You can start doing things in the right chronology or just picking which one is best.
08:48But I think that if you are blocked, I think just start making lists.
08:51I mean, that's like step one for me is just make a list.
08:55Anne: Lisa, your method, and whatever you want to say.
08:59Lisa: God! This is-- well, I could have a whole seminar just on this.
09:06I would say I employ many of these techniques.
09:10This script was a really interesting learning curve for me.
09:13Two huge things that came out of it were, carding, because you can see your
09:19whole film in front of your face and see what's redundant and see what's
09:23not--has no causality, and really look structurally at where you're going.
09:31And it's just something for some reason, I don't know, I think I got bad
09:34advice at graduate school.
09:36I had this teacher that was really, like, you have got to go with your sort of
09:40instinct and blurts, and just like let it ride.
09:43It's going to come out of you. And it was very freeform, but there is something
09:47incredibly anxiety producing about just hoping that having no sort of roadmap
09:53and hoping it will just emerge as a complete idea and/or screenplay.
09:58Anyway, so carding. I found like that structured stuff is really helpful, and I
10:05also agree that in the one screenplay that I wrote early on where I kind of knew
10:09where the story was going and where it ended and what that ultimate scene was--
10:13I actually had a final scene--
10:17I found much more pleasure in the process
10:19I think than groping around in the dark for where things are headed.
10:23Especially with something that's invented,
10:24I am sure there is more comfort when you have some basic facts that you can
10:28adhere to or something that came before it.
10:31The other thing I'd say, I could say a lot about writing with a partner and
10:35whatnot, and the differences between men and women, because he thought I gabbed
10:40too much in between little bursts of writing.
10:44I found that's where some of our juiciest stuff came from. And I am like, I want
10:48to process, and then we'd grab ideas that came up in these kind of random
10:52conversations and throw them into the script.
10:54I would say that Virginia Woolf was right. She wrote a little book long time
10:59ago called A Room of One's Own.
11:02I did not have my own office
11:03when I began The Kids Are All Right, and now there is just no way I could
11:07ever return to not having my own office.
11:10You just have to wall yourself off completely and have that space to imagine.
11:15Anne: I am afraid we have to stop.
11:17I am having a wonderful time, but we have lost track of the time unfortunately.
11:22We have a big panel, and let's give them a big round.
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